diff --git a/Update/onik_001.txt b/Update/onik_001.txt
index 990d118..9cd26f8 100644
--- a/Update/onik_001.txt
+++ b/Update/onik_001.txt
@@ -2144,7 +2144,9 @@ void main()
if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("沙都子", NULL, "Satoko", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 4, "s19/04/990400009", 256, TRUE);
OutputLine(NULL, "「ぼぅ、暴力反対ですのー!!",
- NULL, "\"I-I'm against violence!!", Line_WaitForInput);
+ NULL, "\"I-I'm against violence!!", Line_Continue);
+
+ Wait( 2000 );
OutputLine(NULL, " 証拠もないのにぃ〜!!」",
NULL, " You don't even have any proof!!\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp));
@@ -2350,7 +2352,7 @@ void main()
OutputLine(NULL, "「でも…ちょっとくらいなら……だめかな?",
NULL, "\"But... just for a bit... is fine?", Line_Continue);
- Wait( 300 );
+ Wait( 3000 );
OutputLine(NULL, "だめかな?」",
NULL, " Is fine?\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp));
@@ -3417,7 +3419,7 @@ void main()
// 思わぬタイミングで話を振られたらしく、レナは言葉を詰めらせ赤面す¥
if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
- OutputLine(NULL, " 思わぬタイミングで話を振られたらしく、レナは言葉を詰めらせ赤面する",
+ OutputLine(NULL, " 思わぬタイミングで話を振られたらしく、レナは言葉を詰めらせ赤面する。",
NULL, "It seemed that the topic of conversation switched to Rena when she wasn't expecting it, making her blush and trip over her words.", Line_Normal);
ClearMessage();
@@ -3850,8 +3852,9 @@ void main()
if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("沙都子", NULL, "Satoko", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 4, "s19/04/990400030", 256, TRUE);
OutputLine(NULL, "「レナレナ〜!",
- NULL, "\"Rena, Rena~!", Line_WaitForInput);
- OutputLine(NULL, " 魅ぃ魅ぃがいじめるんですのー!",
+ NULL, "\"Rena, Rena~!", Line_Continue);
+ Wait( 1000 );
+ OutputLine(NULL, " 魅音さんがいじめるんですのー!",
NULL, " MiiMii is picking on me-!", Line_WaitForInput);
ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 4, "s19/04/990400031", 256, TRUE);
OutputLine(NULL, " わあぁあぁああん!!」",
@@ -4665,8 +4668,8 @@ void main()
//「レナもシカトすんなー!2人がラブラブだって回覧す < PS3 voice actually says this@
if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("魅音", NULL, "Mion", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 3, "s19/03/990300072", 256, TRUE);
- OutputLine(NULL, "「レナもシカトすんなー!2人がホテル街へ消えたって回覧す、",
- NULL, "\"Don't you ignore me too, Rena! I'll tell everyone that you two disappeared into the hotel district together!\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp));
+ OutputLine(NULL, "「レナもシカトすんなー!2人がラブラブだって村中に回覧板を」",
+ NULL, "\"Don't you ignore me too, Rena! I'll put out a village-wide circular saying how you two are madly in love!\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp));
if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
diff --git a/Update/onik_002.txt b/Update/onik_002.txt
index 436162f..c43b450 100644
--- a/Update/onik_002.txt
+++ b/Update/onik_002.txt
@@ -464,17 +464,11 @@ void main()
NULL, " Everyone knows everyone since there are so few people here in Hinamizawa.\"", Line_Normal);
ClearMessage();
-//「つまりなんだ@
+//「つまりなんだ@ 知らない顔が歩いてれば、それは自動的に新しく引っ越してきた前原さん、てことになるわけか。@
if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("圭一", NULL, "Keiichi", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 1, "s19/01/hr_kei01330", 256, TRUE);
OutputLine(NULL, "「つまりなんだ。",
- NULL, "\"So that means...", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp));
- if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
-
-
-
-// 知らない顔が歩いてれば、それは自動的に新しく引っ越してきた前原さん、てことになるわけか。@
- if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("圭一", NULL, "Keiichi", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
+ NULL, "\"So that means...", Line_WaitForInput);
ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 1, "s19/01/hr_kei01340", 256, TRUE);
OutputLine(NULL, " 知らない顔が歩いてれば、それは自動的に新しく引っ越してきた前原さん、てことになるわけか。」",
NULL, "So that means when an unfamiliar face walks by, they automatically assume it's that Maebara fella who just moved here?\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp));
@@ -1001,7 +995,7 @@ void main()
OutputLine(NULL, "「ここの場所、よく覚えといてね!",
NULL, "\"This place. Be sure to remember it!", Line_WaitForInput);
ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 3, "s19/03/990300111", 256, TRUE);
- OutputLine(NULL, " 次の休みにはここでお祭りがあるんだから。」",
+ OutputLine(NULL, " もうすぐここでお祭りがあるんだから。」",
NULL, " On our next break, a festival will be held here.\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp));
if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
@@ -1811,7 +1805,7 @@ void main()
NULL, "\"Uh... Um, hey!", Line_WaitForInput);
ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 4, "s19/04/990400046", 256, TRUE);
PlaySE( 4, "wa_029", 64, 64 );
- OutputLine(NULL, " ………レナお姉ちゃんのお弁当、沙都子もおいしかったよ…。",
+ OutputLine(NULL, " ………レナお姉ちゃんのお弁当、沙都子もおいしかったよ…。」",
NULL, " ...So, Rena-oneechan's lunch? Satoko thought it was yummy, too...\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp));
if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
@@ -2332,29 +2326,19 @@ void main()
OutputLine(NULL, "あ〜んしてぇえぇ…けけけ圭一くん",
NULL, " Say ahhh... K-K-K-Keiichi-kun...", Line_Continue);
-//!s100
+ Wait( 1800 );
SetSpeedOfMessage( TRUE, 0, );
- OutputLine(NULL, "……けけけけけ…☆",
- NULL, " ...", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp));
+ OutputLine(NULL, "……けけけけけ…☆」",
+ NULL, " ...Tehehehehe...☆\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp));
if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
SetSpeedOfMessage( FALSE, 0, );
-//!sd
// 強制膝枕の上、俺の口にはまだまだりんごが押し込まれていく@
- if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
- OutputLine(NULL, "」",
- NULL, "Tehehehehe...☆\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp));
- if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
-
-
-
-
-// 奇声を発しながら次々とりんごを…俺の口に…!d200…!d200次々!d200…!d200…!d200…!d200りん!d200…!d200…!d200…!d200ご……¥
if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
OutputLine(NULL, " 強制膝枕の上、俺の口にはまだまだりんごが押し込まれていく。",
NULL, "My head was forcibly laid upon her lap and even more apples were shoved into my mouth.", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
@@ -2613,7 +2597,7 @@ void main()
// うさぎさんのお皿を押しつけられた梨花ちゃんは唖然とする沙都子の手をレフェリーのように振り上げると、!w1000ぼそりと言った@
if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
- OutputLine(NULL, " うさぎさんのお皿を押しつけられた梨花ちゃんは唖然とする紗都子の手をレフェリーのように振り上げると、",
+ OutputLine(NULL, " うさぎさんのお皿を押しつけられた梨花ちゃんは唖然とする沙都子の手をレフェリーのように振り上げると、",
NULL, "Rika-chan raised up Satoko's hand like a referee after having that plate of rabbits shoved to her.", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
SetValidityOfInput( FALSE );
@@ -3300,8 +3284,8 @@ void main()
OutputLine(NULL, "「さぁねぇ。",
NULL, "\"Dunno.", Line_WaitForInput);
ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 1, "s19/01/hr_kei02320", 256, TRUE);
- OutputLine(NULL, "昔、殺して埋めたバラバラ死体でも確認してるんじゃないすか?」",
- NULL, " Maybe she's checking on the dismembered corpse of someone she buried here long ago?\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp));
+ OutputLine(NULL, "昔起こった、殺人事件の死体でも捜してるんじゃないすか?」",
+ NULL, " Maybe she's searching for the corpse from an old murder?\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp));
if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
diff --git a/Update/onik_tips_01.txt b/Update/onik_tips_01.txt
index d86abc0..897e921 100644
--- a/Update/onik_tips_01.txt
+++ b/Update/onik_tips_01.txt
@@ -58,7 +58,8 @@ void main()
if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("魅音", NULL, "Mion", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 3, "s20/03/440300001", 128, TRUE);
OutputLine(NULL, "「そんなことないよ。",
- NULL, "\"That's not true.", Line_WaitForInput);
+ NULL, "\"That's not true.", Line_Continue);
+ Wait( 1200 );
OutputLine(NULL, "誕生日の違いがあれば、年齢が同じでも干支が違うこともありえるって!」",
NULL, " If your birthday isn't the same then you can have different animals even if you're the same age!\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp));
if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
@@ -84,7 +85,8 @@ void main()
if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("レナ", NULL, "Rena", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "s20/02/440200003", 128, TRUE);
OutputLine(NULL, "「あははははは。",
- NULL, "\"Ahahahahaha.", Line_WaitForInput);
+ NULL, "\"Ahahahahaha.", Line_Continue);
+ Wait( 2000 );
OutputLine(NULL, "ところで圭一くんは何月生まれなのかな?",
NULL, " What month were you born, by the way, Keiichi-kun?", Line_WaitForInput);
ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "s20/02/440200004", 128, TRUE);
@@ -119,15 +121,16 @@ void main()
if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("圭一", NULL, "Keiichi", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 1, "s20/01/440100004", 128, TRUE);
OutputLine(NULL, "「…ふ!",
- NULL, "\"...heh!", Line_WaitForInput);
+ NULL, "\"...heh!", Line_Continue);
+ Wait( 1000 );
OutputLine(NULL, " だが諦めろ。",
NULL, " Don't even.", Line_WaitForInput);
ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 1, "s20/01/440100005", 128, TRUE);
OutputLine(NULL, "俺に誕生日で挑もうったって無駄なことだ!!",
NULL, " It's impossible to challenge me by birthday!!", Line_WaitForInput);
ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 1, "s20/01/440100006", 128, TRUE);
- OutputLine(NULL, " ……何ならひと月差ごとに100円の賭けをしてもいいぜー!」",
- NULL, " ... I wouldn't even mind you if you bet a 100 yen per month!\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp));
+ OutputLine(NULL, " ……何ならどっちが年上か、罰ゲームつきで勝負してもいいぜー!」",
+ NULL, " ... We can compete over who's oldest if you like, with punishment, of course!\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp));
if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
@@ -151,15 +154,15 @@ void main()
// 突然、賭けにされて狼狽するレナ@
if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
- OutputLine(NULL, " 突然、賭けにされて狼狽するレナ。",
- NULL, "Rena panicked at suddenly being challenged to a wager.", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp));
+ OutputLine(NULL, " 突然、勝負を挑まれて狼狽するレナ。",
+ NULL, "Rena panicked at suddenly being challenged.", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp));
if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
// ...うろたえ具合から今月の小遣いは残り少ないと断定する@
if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }
- OutputLine(NULL, " …うろたえ具合から今月の小遣いは残り少ないと断定する。",
- NULL, "... Given how panicked she is, I am certain she doesn't have much allowance left this month.", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp));
+ OutputLine(NULL, " …うろたえ具合からそれほど勝算に自信がないものと断定する。",
+ NULL, "... Given how panicked she is, I can be sure she isn't confident in winning.", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp));
if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); }