diff --git a/Update/onik_009_02.txt b/Update/onik_009_02.txt index c0c7658..178b62a 100644 --- a/Update/onik_009_02.txt +++ b/Update/onik_009_02.txt @@ -2489,7 +2489,7 @@ void main() //「出したら…助けに来てくれるのかな?……かな?@ PlaySE(3, "s01/02/120200008", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "「出したら…助けに来てくれるのかな?……かな?」", - NULL, "\"If someone does come... will you come and save me, maybe? ...Maybe?\"", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "\"If I do shout... will you come and save me, maybe? ...Maybe?\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); @@ -2544,7 +2544,7 @@ void main() // 誰もが微塵ほども口にしない祟りの話@……知れば知るほどに不安になる、今夜¥ OutputLine(NULL, " 誰もが微塵ほども口にしない祟りの話。", - NULL, "The curse that not a single person even whispered about.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "The curse that not a soul mentioned, even under their breath.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLine(NULL, "……知れば知るほどに不安になる、今夜。", NULL, " ...The more I learned about it tonight, the more unsettling it became.", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); diff --git a/Update/onik_tips_09.txt b/Update/onik_tips_09.txt index 50b4548..7518a3c 100644 --- a/Update/onik_tips_09.txt +++ b/Update/onik_tips_09.txt @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ // XXさん夫妻は展望台で柵にもたれかかっていた所、柵が壊れ転落した模様@ OutputLine(NULL, " XXさん夫妻は展望台で柵にもたれかかっていた所、柵が壊れ転落した模様。", - NULL, "It appeared a railing at the observatory that the XXs leaned on had broken, causing him to fall.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "It appeared a railing at the observatory that the XXs leaned on had broken, causing them to fall.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);