From b9d9eb8b76f9a092c53e850a4672d7bfa1562b1e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Thu, 10 Dec 2015 18:14:28 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 1/9] wording --- Update/onik_014.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_014.txt b/Update/onik_014.txt index 3d9257c..a916f08 100644 --- a/Update/onik_014.txt +++ b/Update/onik_014.txt @@ -848,7 +848,7 @@ //　…俺はこの泥まみれを自らの甘さの代償として受け入れることにする＠ OutputLine(NULL, "　…俺はこの泥まみれを自らの甘さの代償として受け入れることにする。", - NULL, "...I being covered in mud was the price I had paid for my own naiveté.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "...getting covered in mud was the price I had paid for my own naiveté.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); From ceeaf17d9f4906431634eefa50773c6e861561dd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Thu, 10 Dec 2015 18:17:26 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 2/9] translation fix continuation of fix made to earlier scripts --- Update/onik_014.txt | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_014.txt b/Update/onik_014.txt index a916f08..f8203f1 100644 --- a/Update/onik_014.txt +++ b/Update/onik_014.txt @@ -901,7 +901,7 @@ //　…犯人は村ぐるみの可能性があるって…！￥ OutputLine(NULL, "　…犯人は村ぐるみの可能性があるって…！！", - NULL, "There was the possibility that all the families of the village were involved...!!", Line_Normal); + NULL, "There was the possibility of a village conspiracy...!!", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); @@ -961,7 +961,7 @@ //　敵は複数、村ぐるみ＠…祟りを妄信する村人たちは俺を助けない￥ OutputLine(NULL, "　敵は複数、村ぐるみ。", - NULL, "The enemy were numerous: all the village families.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "The enemy were numerous: the whole village.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLine(NULL, "…祟りを妄信する村人たちは俺を助けない。", NULL, " ...The villagers with their unwavering faith in the curse would do nothing to help me.", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); From 618367e863f705fec26a324ac75ef4bc69c7dc83 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Thu, 10 Dec 2015 18:43:41 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 3/9] translation fix pretty inconsequential, but meh! --- Update/onik_014.txt | 3 +-- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_014.txt b/Update/onik_014.txt index f8203f1..f692320 100644 --- a/Update/onik_014.txt +++ b/Update/onik_014.txt @@ -1805,7 +1805,6 @@ NULL, " This old man will cheer you on.\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); - DisableWindow(); DrawBustshot( 3, "re_se_wa_a1", 160, 0, 0, FALSE, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 20, 200, TRUE ); @@ -1824,7 +1823,7 @@ //　なんだかいつの間にか球児にされてしまったが、まぁいいか￥ OutputLine(NULL, "　なんだかいつの間にか球児にされてしまったが、まぁいいか。", - NULL, "Seems they've made me out as some kind of local prodigy, but oh well...", Line_Normal); + NULL, "Seems they've already taken me for a baseball nut, but oh well...", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); DisableWindow(); DrawSceneWithMask( "bg_027", "up", 0, 0, 300 ); From 185efe0ad8219f3fc143bc9ecac507febcf4e402 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Thu, 10 Dec 2015 18:44:44 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 4/9] translation fix --- Update/onik_014.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_014.txt b/Update/onik_014.txt index f692320..5e2638f 100644 --- a/Update/onik_014.txt +++ b/Update/onik_014.txt @@ -1837,7 +1837,7 @@ //　何しろ、ピッチャーもキャッチャーも俺ひとりなのだ＠ OutputLine(NULL, "　何しろ、ピッチャーもキャッチャーも俺ひとりなのだ。", - NULL, "After all, I'd be the pitcher and catcher.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "After all, I'm playing both the pitcher and the catcher.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); From 71c9b13c7b61ca8440834478b99b6d5ec5e7820a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Thu, 10 Dec 2015 18:48:39 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 5/9] Revert "translation fix" This reverts commit 185efe0ad8219f3fc143bc9ecac507febcf4e402. --- Update/onik_014.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_014.txt b/Update/onik_014.txt index 5e2638f..f692320 100644 --- a/Update/onik_014.txt +++ b/Update/onik_014.txt @@ -1837,7 +1837,7 @@ //　何しろ、ピッチャーもキャッチャーも俺ひとりなのだ＠ OutputLine(NULL, "　何しろ、ピッチャーもキャッチャーも俺ひとりなのだ。", - NULL, "After all, I'm playing both the pitcher and the catcher.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "After all, I'd be the pitcher and catcher.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); From 8cbd8a3c87b5c29cc0d81b417038d204009d1f8a Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Thu, 10 Dec 2015 18:50:08 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 6/9] translation fix got the person smiling wrong --- Update/onik_014.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_014.txt b/Update/onik_014.txt index f692320..ff0ffa1 100644 --- a/Update/onik_014.txt +++ b/Update/onik_014.txt @@ -1889,7 +1889,7 @@ //　あんな風に微笑まれたら…俺は………俺は…ッ！＠ OutputLine(NULL, "　あんな風に微笑まれたら…俺は………俺は…ッ！！", - NULL, "If they make me smile like that... I'll... I'll... ngh!!", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "If they smile at me like that... I'll... I'll... ngh!!", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); From 5cf4bc3b241e72ede0b0ba73f0d3898728ed7ade Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Thu, 10 Dec 2015 19:05:44 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 7/9] wording --- Update/onik_014.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_014.txt b/Update/onik_014.txt index ff0ffa1..633977e 100644 --- a/Update/onik_014.txt +++ b/Update/onik_014.txt @@ -3219,7 +3219,7 @@ NULL, " Definitely.", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s01/02/120200230", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "なんで圭一くんまで…。」", - NULL, " Why has Keiichi-kun also...\"", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, " Why you too...\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); From 3de6d555aadf55a983ee55b48eadb96891247da2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Thu, 10 Dec 2015 19:07:43 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 8/9] wording --- Update/onik_014.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_014.txt b/Update/onik_014.txt index 633977e..15388c9 100644 --- a/Update/onik_014.txt +++ b/Update/onik_014.txt @@ -3313,7 +3313,7 @@ //「な、なんでバットまで同じなのッ？！？！＠ PlaySE(3, "s01/02/120200235", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "「な、なんでバットまで同じなのッ？！？！」", - NULL, "\"Wh-Why is that bat the same, too!?!?\"", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "\"Wh-Why is even your bat the same!?!?\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); From 617eb7886a28e4c7c662405268aaae7273d64ed2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Thu, 10 Dec 2015 19:54:49 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 9/9] timing, text flow & matching to Sui audio --- Update/onik_014.txt | 40 ++++++++++++++++------------------------ 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 24 deletions(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_014.txt b/Update/onik_014.txt index 15388c9..9c5f369 100644 --- a/Update/onik_014.txt +++ b/Update/onik_014.txt @@ -1718,7 +1718,8 @@ //「わ、圭一くん、…野球部だよ＠　野球部だよ？？＠ PlaySE(3, "s01/02/120200200", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "「わ、圭一くん、…野球部だよ？", - NULL, "\"Whoa, Keiichi-kun... are you on the baseball team?", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "\"Whoa, Keiichi-kun... are you on the baseball team?", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); + Wait (1600); OutputLine(NULL, "　野球部だよ？？」", NULL, " ...The baseball team??\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); @@ -1805,15 +1806,17 @@ NULL, " This old man will cheer you on.\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); - DisableWindow(); - DrawBustshot( 3, "re_se_wa_a1", 160, 0, 0, FALSE, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 20, 200, TRUE ); +// DisableWindow(); +// DrawBustshot( 3, "re_se_wa_a1", 160, 0, 0, FALSE, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 20, 200, TRUE ); +// Commented out Rena's sprite change because the script from Sui takes her line out :( //「…県立大島が強いらしいよ＠左腕の亀田くんがすごいんだって＠…頑張ってね！＠ + PlaySE(3, "s01/03/120300137", 256, 64); + OutputLine(NULL, "「…野球部の強い高校、教えよっか？", + NULL, "\"...Want me to tell you the best highschools for baseball?", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s01/03/120300138", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "「…県立大島が強いらしいよ。", - NULL, "\"...Regionally speaking, it seems that Oshima High is pretty strong.", Line_WaitForInput); - OutputLine(NULL, "左腕の亀田くんがすごいんだって。", - NULL, " They say their southpaw, Kameda-kun, is amazing.", Line_WaitForInput); + OutputLine(NULL, "そこにいる左腕の、亀田くんがすごいピッチャーなんだけどさ。", + NULL, " See Kameda-kun over there? He's a southpaw and an amazing pitcher.", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s01/03/120300139", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "…頑張ってね！」", NULL, " Good luck!\"", Line_WaitForInput); @@ -3099,13 +3102,11 @@ NULL, " Umm, well...", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); SetValidityOfInput( FALSE ); - Wait( 500 ); + Wait( 1000 ); SetValidityOfInput( TRUE ); - OutputLineAll(NULL, "", Line_WaitForInput); - OutputLine(NULL, "あのね！", - NULL, "Well...", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); + NULL, " well...", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); SetValidityOfInput( FALSE ); Wait( 200 ); @@ -3522,7 +3523,7 @@ NULL, " Why is it...", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); SetValidityOfInput( FALSE ); - Wait( 1000 ); + Wait( 1600 ); SetValidityOfInput( TRUE ); OutputLine(NULL, "どうしてそんなにまで同じなのッ？！」", @@ -3867,20 +3868,11 @@ NULL, "\"Satoshi-kun, you see...", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); PlaySE( 4, "wa_023", 125, 64 ); + Wait (1800); //"!s100転校!sd"しちゃったの。＠ - - OutputLine(NULL, "“", - NULL, " '", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); - Wait(100); - SetSpeedOfMessage( TRUE, 0, ); - OutputLine(NULL, "転校", - NULL, "transferred", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); - - SetSpeedOfMessage( FALSE, 0, ); - OutputLine(NULL, "”しちゃったの。」", - NULL, "' out.\"", Line_WaitForInput); - OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); + OutputLine(NULL, "　転校しちゃったの。」", + NULL, " transferred out.\"", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); //　転校って……なんだよ…＠