From 1a73dec829f3fb14e2d1b9fda17687dc86679f40 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Thu, 19 Nov 2015 19:35:30 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] wording using "thought" makes it sound like a lead up to a surprise where the "body" was actually alive - opposite of intentions! --- Update/onik_tips_06.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_tips_06.txt b/Update/onik_tips_06.txt index dd809e7..bdc2f88 100644 --- a/Update/onik_tips_06.txt +++ b/Update/onik_tips_06.txt @@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ //　血の惨劇が終われば、そこには誰の眼にも生きているとは思えない無残な屍...￥ OutputLine(NULL, "　血の惨劇が終われば、そこには誰の眼にも生きているとは思えない無残な屍…。", - NULL, "After this bloody tragedy was over, they were left with a body which nobody thought was alive...", Line_Normal); + NULL, "After this bloody tragedy was over, they were left with a body which nobody could have mistaken as alive...", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); //　日頃から粗暴な振る舞いで容疑者たちをいじめていたＸＸさん＠