From 1b85711c3b83e82756d9a8a72cd344703434decd Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Tue, 8 Dec 2015 17:23:13 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] wording to me it feels unnatural for internal monologue to be saying "you know?" --- Update/onik_013.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_013.txt b/Update/onik_013.txt index dea4f98..7c1ef84 100644 --- a/Update/onik_013.txt +++ b/Update/onik_013.txt @@ -2667,7 +2667,7 @@ void main() //　そのレナは部屋の前で１時間も聞き耳を立ててたんだぞ？＠ OutputLine(NULL, "　そのレナは部屋の前で１時間も聞き耳を立ててたんだぞ？！", - NULL, "Rena was standing outside our door eavesdropping for a good hour, you know!?", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "Rena was standing outside my door eavesdropping for a solid hour!?", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);