diff --git a/Update/omake_01.txt b/Update/omake_01.txt index eef5270..a2028be 100644 --- a/Update/omake_01.txt +++ b/Update/omake_01.txt @@ -1626,6 +1626,7 @@ void main() DrawBustshotWithFiltering( 3, "ri_se_wa_a1", "right", 1, 160, 0, FALSE, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 20, 300, TRUE ); //「……立ち絵を描いてもらえたら圭一も来れますですよ。@ +// Leaving this part on the old translation, because I can't think of a way to translate the Sui line that actually makes sense, and the character art gag stands alone okay PlaySE(3, "s20/05/440500101", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "「……収録の残り台詞数でボクたちの誰か一人でも抜いたら、圭一も参加できるのですよ。」", NULL, "\"...You can come if you get some character art for yourself.\"", Line_WaitForInput); @@ -1637,6 +1638,7 @@ void main() DrawBustshotWithFiltering( 1, "sa_se_ak_a1", "left", 1, -160, 0, FALSE, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 300, TRUE ); //「梨花、それは内緒ですわ…。¥ +// Also keeping the original translation here. PlaySE(3, "s20/04/440400159", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "「梨花、あの量でそれは不可能ですわ…。」", NULL, "\"Rika, that's a secret...\"", Line_Normal); @@ -1743,7 +1745,7 @@ void main() NULL, "\"...So very, very, pitiful.", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s20/05/440500103", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "今度、頭をなでなでしてあげますですよ。」", - NULL, " Next time, I'll pat you on the head for you.\"", Line_Normal); + NULL, " Next time, I'll give you a good patting on the head.\"", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); DisableWindow(); DrawBustshot( 5, "black", 0, 0, 0, FALSE, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 25, 3000, TRUE ); diff --git a/Update/onik_000.txt b/Update/onik_000.txt index fb7b3c9..7ec2a7d 100644 --- a/Update/onik_000.txt +++ b/Update/onik_000.txt @@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ // アイスクリーム屋なんてもってのほかだ@ OutputLine(NULL, " アイスクリーム屋なんてもってのほかだ。", - NULL, "Even an ice cream parlor would be unlikely.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "An ice cream parlor? No chance.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); @@ -126,7 +126,7 @@ // 前の町には確かにレコード屋もゲームセンターもアイスクリーム屋もあったが、別にそれらを頻繁に利用していたわけじゃない@ OutputLine(NULL, " 前の町には確かにレコード屋もゲームセンターもアイスクリーム屋もあったが、別にそれらを頻繁に利用していたわけじゃない。", - NULL, "There were music stores and arcades and ice cream parlors, but it wasn't like I ever hung out at any of them.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "There were music stores and arcades and ice cream parlors where I used to live, but it wasn't like I ever hung out at any of them.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);