From 28c54e6e4e8d40056ccb145499da91084078c791 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Wed, 25 Nov 2015 19:26:18 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] small fixes & consistency the Rika-chan quote should be "fought", to use the same phrasing as in day 3. --- Update/onik_009_02.txt | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_009_02.txt b/Update/onik_009_02.txt index 8a1edf0..fe23ade 100644 --- a/Update/onik_009_02.txt +++ b/Update/onik_009_02.txt @@ -322,7 +322,7 @@ void main() NULL, "\"The decision to start the dam project was finalized seven or eight years ago.", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s01/08/120800012", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "黒部に次ぐ巨大な計画だったと聞いてるね。」", - NULL, " I heard it was the next major project after Kurobe.\"", Line_Normal); + NULL, " I heard it was the next largest project after the one in Kurobe.\"", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); DisableWindow(); @@ -365,7 +365,7 @@ void main() NULL, "\"The dam reservoir would have covered quite a lot of ground when it was completed.", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s01/08/120800014", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "この雛見沢からずーっと上流の谷河内（やごうち）辺りまでが全部沈むことになったらしい。」", - NULL, " The entire area, right up to Yagouichi way upstream, would be underwater.\"", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, " The entire area, right up to Yagouchi way upstream, would be underwater.\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); @@ -394,7 +394,7 @@ void main() //　以前、梨花ちゃんが「戦った」と表現したが、それからも激しいものだったことが伺える￥ OutputLine(NULL, "　以前、梨花ちゃんが「戦った」と表現したが、それからも激しいものだったことが伺える。", - NULL, "Rika-chan had said there was a 'battle.' From that choice of words I had to guess things had turned violent.", Line_Normal); + NULL, "Rika-chan had said that they had 'fought.' From that choice of words I had to guess things had turned violent.", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); //「裁判にもなったし議会でも取り上げられたんだ＠東京の新聞にも載ったよ。＠