From 7263dcdaa2c2da629c9470b527a27b7516f03099 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Tue, 17 Nov 2015 17:55:18 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] grammar correction "pick" is the wrong verb, and the usage was a little wrong too. http://blog.dictionary.com/pique-peak-peek/ --- Update/onik_001.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_001.txt b/Update/onik_001.txt index df0189d..165129d 100644 --- a/Update/onik_001.txt +++ b/Update/onik_001.txt @@ -988,7 +988,7 @@ void main() //そう言って、不敵に笑う魅音の肩を俺はポンと叩く OutputLine(NULL, "　そう言って、不敵に笑う魅音の肩を俺はポンと叩く", - NULL, "Picking my interest, I placed my hand on her shoulder while she was still smirking.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "My interest piqued, I placed my hand on her shoulder while she was still smirking.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); //「……ちなみにレナのスリーサイズは？」