From 74ab56c81707b31a404b8ffd762653c84e6d745d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Thu, 19 Nov 2015 19:30:39 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] tense consistency continued past tense where that made sense (try reading through) --- Update/onik_tips_05.txt | 10 +++++----- 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_tips_05.txt b/Update/onik_tips_05.txt index b79f28f..20214bb 100644 --- a/Update/onik_tips_05.txt +++ b/Update/onik_tips_05.txt @@ -31,20 +31,20 @@ //　計画された「雛見沢ダム」の規模は甚大で、雛見沢村の受ける影響は余りに重大だった￥ OutputLine(NULL, "　計画された「雛見沢ダム」の規模は甚大で、雛見沢村の受ける影響は余りに重大だった。", - NULL, "The vast scope of the projected Hinamizawa dam will have an incredibly heavy impact on the village of Hinamizawa.", Line_Normal); + NULL, "The vast scope of the projected Hinamizawa dam was to have an incredibly heavy impact on the village of Hinamizawa.", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); DisableWindow(); DrawScene( "bg_005", 1000 ); //　雛見沢ダムにより水没する地域は雛見沢、高津戸、清津、松本、谷河内の五ヶ部落に及び＠ OutputLine(NULL, "　雛見沢ダムにより水没する地域は雛見沢、高津戸、清津、松本、谷河内の五ヶ部落に及び、", - NULL, "The flooded area caused by the Hinamizawa dam would include the five areas of Hinamizawa, Takatsudo, Kiyotsu, Matsumoto, and Yagochi.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "The area to be flooded by the Hinamizawa dam would include the five areas of Hinamizawa, Takatsudo, Kiyotsu, Matsumoto, and Yagochi.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); //　水没世帯は二九一戸＠人口一二五一人＠小学校一＠中学校一＠郵便局一＠農協支所一＠営林署貯木場一＠神社五＠寺院二＠魚族増殖場一＠等多数の公共的文化的生産的施設と信仰の対象を永久に湖底に没するものである￥ OutputLine(NULL, "　水没世帯は二九一戸、", - NULL, "The submerged area includes 291 houses.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "The submerged area would include 291 houses.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLine(NULL, "人口一二五一人、", NULL, " Population: 1,251,", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLine(NULL, "小学校一、", @@ -64,14 +64,14 @@ OutputLine(NULL, "魚族増殖場一、", NULL, " and 1 fishery.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLine(NULL, "等多数の公共的文化的生産的施設と信仰の対象を永久に湖底に没するものである。", - NULL, " All of these communal, cultural, agricultural areas, and places of worship will be indefinitely submerged at the bottom of the artificial lake basin.", Line_Normal); + NULL, " All of these communal, cultural, agricultural areas, and places of worship were to be indefinitely submerged at the bottom of the artificial lake basin.", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); DisableWindow(); DrawScene( "bg_002", 1000 ); //　この天恵豊かで住みよい郷土を、血と汗をもって築いてくれた父祖幾百年の艱難辛苦を思えば余りに痛ましいことであり＠ OutputLine(NULL, "　この天恵豊かで住みよい郷土を、血と汗をもって築いてくれた父祖幾百年の艱難辛苦を思えば余りに痛ましいことであり、", - NULL, "Forsaking the hundreds of years our ancestors poured their blood and sweat into this fertile, resource-rich land is just too painful to bear.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "Forsaking the hundreds of years our ancestors poured their blood and sweat into this fertile, resource-rich land was just too painful to bear.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);