diff --git a/Update/onik_009_02.txt b/Update/onik_009_02.txt index 5cd687b..8b61252 100644 --- a/Update/onik_009_02.txt +++ b/Update/onik_009_02.txt @@ -1548,17 +1548,14 @@ void main() NULL, " Or it may have been because of a pre-existing condition.\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); - - //「でも、奇病ですよ@ この医学の進歩した時代に原因不明なんて…。¥ PlaySE(3, "s01/01/120100029", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "「でも、奇病ですよ?", - NULL, "\"But it was an unknown illness.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "\"But it was an unknown illness.", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); OutputLine(NULL, " この医学の進歩した時代に原因不明なんて…。」", - NULL, " It's hard to believe something with an unknown cause could exist with all our advances in medicine...\"", Line_Normal); + NULL, " It's hard to believe such a thing could exist with all our advances in medicine...\"", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); - //「尾ひれだよ@噂が噂を呼んだだけさ@ PlaySE(3, "s01/08/120800076", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "「尾ひれだよ。", @@ -1725,7 +1722,7 @@ void main() NULL, " Even if Oyashiro-sama's curse actually did exist,", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s01/08/120800096", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "そんな圭一くんに祟りがあるなんてとても思えないね。」", - NULL, " Keiichi-kun couldn't bring himself to believe that such a thing existed.\"", Line_Normal); + NULL, " I can't imagine that Keiichi-kun would become a target.\"", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); @@ -2058,7 +2055,7 @@ void main() // 甘いぜ富竹さん。これがあるからうちの部は負けられないんだよ…¥ OutputLine(NULL, " 甘いぜ富竹さん。これがあるからうちの部は負けられないんだよ…。", - NULL, "You're too naive, Tomitake-san. This is why our club can never lose...", Line_Normal); + NULL, "You're too naive, Tomitake-san. This is why you've got to avoid losing in our club...", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); @@ -2093,7 +2090,7 @@ void main() NULL, "\"Ahaha, it just has to be permanent.", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s01/03/120300006", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "お洗濯したら落ちちゃうじゃない。」", - NULL, " It comes off when you do the laundry, anyway.\"", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, " Water-based marker would come off in the laundry.\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); @@ -2456,7 +2453,7 @@ void main() //「こんな時間だけど、…1人で大丈夫か?@ PlaySE(3, "s01/01/120100042", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "「こんな時間だけど、…1人で大丈夫か?」", - NULL, "\"It's already pretty late. Are you all right by yourself?\"", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "\"It's already pretty late. Are you alright by yourself?\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); @@ -2489,7 +2486,7 @@ void main() //「出したら…助けに来てくれるのかな?……かな?@ PlaySE(3, "s01/02/120200008", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "「出したら…助けに来てくれるのかな?……かな?」", - NULL, "\"If someone does come... will you come and save me, maybe? ...Maybe?\"", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "\"If I do shout... will you come and save me, maybe? ...Maybe?\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); @@ -2544,7 +2541,7 @@ void main() // 誰もが微塵ほども口にしない祟りの話@……知れば知るほどに不安になる、今夜¥ OutputLine(NULL, " 誰もが微塵ほども口にしない祟りの話。", - NULL, "The curse that not a single person even whispered about.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "The curse that not a soul mentioned, even under their breath.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLine(NULL, "……知れば知るほどに不安になる、今夜。", NULL, " ...The more I learned about it tonight, the more unsettling it became.", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); diff --git a/Update/onik_tips_09.txt b/Update/onik_tips_09.txt index 50b4548..7518a3c 100644 --- a/Update/onik_tips_09.txt +++ b/Update/onik_tips_09.txt @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ // XXさん夫妻は展望台で柵にもたれかかっていた所、柵が壊れ転落した模様@ OutputLine(NULL, " XXさん夫妻は展望台で柵にもたれかかっていた所、柵が壊れ転落した模様。", - NULL, "It appeared a railing at the observatory that the XXs leaned on had broken, causing him to fall.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "It appeared a railing at the observatory that the XXs leaned on had broken, causing them to fall.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);