From 7cba79f21479bc5f2aebc91298da4f309b431db8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: =?UTF-8?q?J=C3=A1chym=20Tou=C5=A1ek?= Date: Tue, 20 Jun 2017 11:06:26 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Improve onik_015_03.txt --- Update/onik_015_03.txt | 14 ++++++-------- 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_015_03.txt b/Update/onik_015_03.txt index 8ba6d1b..f532b21 100644 --- a/Update/onik_015_03.txt +++ b/Update/onik_015_03.txt @@ -1279,7 +1279,6 @@ void main() FadeOutBGM( 2, 10, TRUE ); OutputLineAll(NULL, "", Line_WaitForInput); - OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); PlayBGM( 2, "lsys24", 128, 0 ); @@ -1527,7 +1526,7 @@ void main() //警邏中の警察官（雛見沢駐在所）が電話ボックス内で倒れているのを発見する。/ OutputLine(NULL, "警邏中の警察官（雛見沢駐在所）が電話ボックス内で倒れているのを発見する。", - NULL, " however, a patrolling officer (Hinamizawa Local PD) found the suspect collapsed inside a phone booth.", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); + NULL, " However, a patrolling officer (Hinamizawa Local PD) found the suspect collapsed inside a phone booth.", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); FadeOutBGM( 2, 10, TRUE ); OutputLineAll(NULL, "", Line_Normal); @@ -1725,7 +1724,7 @@ void main() PlayBGM( 2, "lsys24", 128, 0 ); OutputLine(NULL, "まるで隠蔽するかのように、", - NULL, "And as if trying to conceal it", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "And as if trying to conceal it", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); // !s100 @@ -1838,7 +1837,6 @@ void main() FadeOutBGM( 2, 10, TRUE ); OutputLineAll(NULL, "", Line_WaitForInput); - OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); PlayBGM( 2, "lsys24", 128, 0 ); @@ -1856,7 +1854,7 @@ void main() //　"真ん中の数行を削除するために"/ OutputLine(NULL, "　“真ん中の数行を削除するために”", - NULL, "\"In order to erase several lines from the middle,\" someone had...", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); + NULL, "In order to erase several lines from the middle, someone had...", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); FadeOutBGM( 2, 10, TRUE ); OutputLineAll(NULL, "", Line_WaitForInput); @@ -1906,7 +1904,7 @@ void main() //"メモ以外にも何かが貼り付けられていたのではないか"との憶測も出た。 OutputLine(NULL, "“メモ以外にも何かが貼り付けられていたのではないか”との憶測も出た。", - NULL, " speculation that \"something other than the note was stuck there,\" has arisen.", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); + NULL, " speculation that something other than the note was stuck there, has arisen.", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); FadeOutBGM( 2, 10, TRUE ); OutputLineAll(NULL, "", Line_Normal); @@ -2015,7 +2013,7 @@ void main() //（ここまでが１枚目。ここから下は真横に破られている。） OutputLine(NULL, "（ここまでが１枚目。ここから下は真横に破られている。）", - NULL, "(This is all on the first sheet. The section below this has been ripped out.)", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); + NULL, "(This is all on the first sheet. The section below this has been ripped out.)", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); FadeOutBGM( 2, 10, TRUE ); OutputLineAll(NULL, "", Line_Normal); @@ -2060,7 +2058,7 @@ void main() //　…死体があるか、ないかの違いはあるでしょうが。 OutputLine(NULL, "…死体があるか、ないかの違いはあるでしょうが。", - NULL, " ...Though you may or may not find my body.\"", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); + NULL, " ...Though you may or may not find my body.", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); FadeOutBGM( 2, 10, TRUE ); OutputLineAll(NULL, "", Line_Normal);