diff --git a/Update/onik_013.txt b/Update/onik_013.txt
index 0eaf6f3..0684d56 100644
--- a/Update/onik_013.txt
+++ b/Update/onik_013.txt
@@ -430,14 +430,14 @@ void main()
 
 //　そんな俺の様子に……例えば大石さんのような人間に「何かの異変」を気取られかねない、ということなのだろう￥
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　そんな俺の様子に……例えば大石さんのような人間に「何かの異変」を気取られかねない、ということなのだろう。",
-		   NULL, "For example, maybe... I shouldn't pay attention to someone like Ooishi-san enticing me with \"something unusual.\"", Line_Normal);
+		   NULL, "If I acted differently, someone like Ooishi-san, for example, might end up noticing that \"something is up.\"", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //　つまり、…俺自身が口を閉ざしていようと、いつもと違う振る舞いをすれば＠それは結果的に「好まざる者」たちに何かを伝えてしまう結果となるわけだ…＠
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　つまり、…俺自身が口を閉ざしていようと、いつもと違う振る舞いをすれば、",
 		   NULL, "Meaning... if I didn't watch my mouth or did anything differently from the norm,", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "それは結果的に「好まざる者」たちに何かを伝えてしまう結果となるわけだ…。",
-		   NULL, " in effect, it would end up flagging myself as someone who was \"not wanted\"...", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, " in effect, it would end up communicating something to those who were \"undesirable\"...", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);