From afa586f0eed5d8381894c6ab3fb6b0b7fcea272b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Fri, 20 Nov 2015 19:01:07 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 01/10] translation fix fairly sure the line is more of an "us" than "it is called" (like saying "in these parts") --- Update/onik_004.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_004.txt b/Update/onik_004.txt index 5993d77..4766926 100644 --- a/Update/onik_004.txt +++ b/Update/onik_004.txt @@ -353,7 +353,7 @@ void main() //「ここいらではこの遊びのこと、「ゾンビ鬼」って呼んでるけどね。＠ PlaySE(3, "s19/03/990300226", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "「ここいらではこの遊びのこと、「ゾンビ鬼」って呼んでるけどね。」", - NULL, "\"They call the version we're playing here zombie tag, you see.\"", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "\"We call this version \"zombie tag\", you see.\", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); From 66c69cc6abf5c551b8d1e143edb461e03ab0c879 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Fri, 20 Nov 2015 20:02:26 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 02/10] PG translation change From criminal perversion to legal perversion. Good for you, Keiichi! --- Update/onik_004.txt | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_004.txt b/Update/onik_004.txt index 4766926..82a3b9d 100644 --- a/Update/onik_004.txt +++ b/Update/onik_004.txt @@ -1468,8 +1468,8 @@ void main() //「趣味はお風呂覗きなんだってー。＠ PlaySE(3, "s19/00/girlB99003", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "「趣味はお風呂覗きなんだってー。」", - NULL, "\"They say he enjoys peeping into bathrooms.\"", Line_WaitForInput); + OutputLine(NULL, "「趣味は抱きまくらのコレクションなんだってー。」", + NULL, "\"They say he has a collection of dakimakura love pillows.\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); @@ -1483,8 +1483,8 @@ void main() //「夜な夜な下着を盗んで回ってるって本当なのぅ？＠ PlaySE(3, "s19/00/girlC99004", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "「夜な夜な下着を盗んで回ってるって本当なのぅ？」", - NULL, "\"Is it true that he's going around every night stealing panties?\"", Line_WaitForInput); + OutputLine(NULL, "「夜な夜な抱きながら寝てるって本当なのぅ？」", + NULL, "\"Is it true that he sleeps with them at night?\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); From 1031699641c7f5524471d209b2ea30cc6880ff03 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Fri, 20 Nov 2015 20:08:25 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 03/10] more PG more dakimakura --- Update/onik_004.txt | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_004.txt b/Update/onik_004.txt index 82a3b9d..238b9d4 100644 --- a/Update/onik_004.txt +++ b/Update/onik_004.txt @@ -1498,8 +1498,8 @@ void main() //「ぱんつをかぶったり匂いを嗅いだりするんだって。＠ PlaySE(3, "s19/00/girlD99003", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "「ぱんつをかぶったり匂いを嗅いだりするんだって。」", - NULL, "\"I heard he wears panties on his head and smells them and stuff.\"", Line_WaitForInput); + OutputLine(NULL, "「ふにふにの柔らか～い感触がたまんないって。」", + NULL, "\"I heard he can't get enough of the fluffy soft sensation!\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); @@ -1513,8 +1513,8 @@ void main() //「魅音委員長も被害にあったって言ってたよー！」!w800 PlaySE(3, "s19/00/girlE99003", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "「魅音委員長も被害にあったって言ってたよー！」", - NULL, "\"I heard that Class Representative Mion was a victim too~!\"", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); + OutputLine(NULL, "「委員長の写真貼り付けたのもあるらしいよー！」", + NULL, "\"I heard he even has one with a photo of our Class Rep stuck to it~!\"", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); SetValidityOfInput( FALSE ); Wait( 800 ); From 281d8920b70966e330476926855c753b1bf7a89b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Fri, 20 Nov 2015 20:10:28 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 04/10] flow changed the (too short) wait to a "wait for input" type command --- Update/onik_004.txt | 8 +------- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 7 deletions(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_004.txt b/Update/onik_004.txt index 238b9d4..a670de0 100644 --- a/Update/onik_004.txt +++ b/Update/onik_004.txt @@ -1514,13 +1514,7 @@ void main() //「魅音委員長も被害にあったって言ってたよー！」!w800 PlaySE(3, "s19/00/girlE99003", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "「委員長の写真貼り付けたのもあるらしいよー！」", - NULL, "\"I heard he even has one with a photo of our Class Rep stuck to it~!\"", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); - - SetValidityOfInput( FALSE ); - Wait( 800 ); - SetValidityOfInput( TRUE ); - OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); - + NULL, "\"I heard he even has one with a photo of our Class Rep stuck to it~!\"", Line_WaitForInput); //「え゛ーーーッッ？！￥ PlaySE(3, "s19/00/girlD99004", 256, 64); From 7f1f5fdf0611a2683fb1eb0ff9ae5e359e904cee Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Fri, 20 Nov 2015 20:12:41 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 05/10] match voice text presumaly this change was made to follow the dakimakura thing slandering Keiichi as an Otaku perv --- Update/onik_004.txt | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_004.txt b/Update/onik_004.txt index a670de0..887ebcb 100644 --- a/Update/onik_004.txt +++ b/Update/onik_004.txt @@ -1593,8 +1593,8 @@ void main() OutputLine(NULL, "「聞いたー？", NULL, "\"Did you hear?", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s19/00/girlE99005", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "　転校生の前原さんてＨな人なんだってー！", - NULL, " I heard that the new transfer student Maebara-san is a really perverted person!", Line_WaitForInput); + OutputLine(NULL, "　転校生の前原さんて2次元萌えな人なんだってー！", + NULL, " I heard that the new transfer student Maebara-san is into anime girls!", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s19/00/girlE99006", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "　きゃはははは！！」", NULL, " Kyahahahaha!!\"", Line_WaitForInput); From bbc54b6f2d8401c00fb5e179c66bc0e5a787da66 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Fri, 20 Nov 2015 20:43:18 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 06/10] trademark issue change? Gundam references changed out to more generic lines --- Update/onik_004.txt | 32 ++++++++++++++++---------------- 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_004.txt b/Update/onik_004.txt index 887ebcb..e8eac07 100644 --- a/Update/onik_004.txt +++ b/Update/onik_004.txt @@ -2202,8 +2202,8 @@ void main() //スペースコロニーだッ！！」/ PlaySE(3, "s19/01/hr_kei05880", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "スペースコロニーだッ！！」", - NULL, "Was a space colony!!\"", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); + OutputLine(NULL, "小惑星だッ！！」", + NULL, "Was a comet!!\"", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); PlaySE( 4, "wa_007", 128, 64 ); ShakeScreen( 1, 50, 20, 3, 0, ); @@ -2216,25 +2216,25 @@ void main() //「ス、スペースコロニーですってぇえぇッ？！＠ PlaySE(3, "s19/04/990400106", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "「ス、スペースコロニーですってぇえぇッ？！」", - NULL, "\"A-A space colonyyyyy!?\"", Line_WaitForInput); + OutputLine(NULL, "「しょっ小惑星ですってぇえぇッ？！」", + NULL, "\"A-An asteroid!?\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); //「あぁ、ものすごい大惨事だぞ＠　半径数百キロは壊滅だ＠　だがこれは悲劇の序章にしか過ぎない！＠　なんとこれこそは…ジオン広告社が引き起こした独立戦争の幕開けだったのだッ！！」/ PlaySE(3, "s19/01/hr_kei05890", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "「あぁ、ものすごい大惨事だぞ！", - NULL, "\"Yeah, it's a really big disaster!", Line_WaitForInput); + OutputLine(NULL, "「あぁ、宇宙人が作った装置でロシュの限界を解除し、まず一個落としたらしい。！", + NULL, "\"Yeah, the aliens deactivated the Roche limit with a device they created and started by hurling one asteroid", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s19/01/hr_kei05900", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "　半径数百キロは壊滅だ！", - NULL, " Everything in a 100 kilometer radius was obliterated!", Line_WaitForInput); + OutputLine(NULL, "　まさか俺もそこまでやるとは思わなかった。", + NULL, " Even I didn't think that they'd go this far.", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s19/01/hr_kei05910", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "　だがこれは悲劇の序章にしか過ぎない！！", - NULL, " But that's only the prelude to this tragic tale!!", Line_WaitForInput); + OutputLine(NULL, "　しかも、続いて今度は百個も！！", + NULL, " And they plan to drop 100 of them next!!", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s19/01/hr_kei05920", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "　なんとこれこそは…ジオン広告社が引き起こした独立戦争の幕開けだったのだッ！！」", - NULL, " This is the beginning... the start of a war for independence by the Propagandapality of Zeon!!\"", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); + OutputLine(NULL, "　地球軍の完全な誤算だッ！！」", + NULL, " The Earth federation was totally unprepared!!\"", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); PlaySE( 4, "wa_007", 128, 64 ); ShakeScreen( 0, 50, 20, 3, 0, ); @@ -2251,11 +2251,11 @@ void main() //「そ…それでどうなるの…＠　地球連邦は負けちゃうの？￥ PlaySE(3, "s19/00/girlC99005", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "「そ…それでどうなるの…？", - NULL, "\"Wh... What will happen...?", Line_WaitForInput); + OutputLine(NULL, "「ち…地球軍って…？", + NULL, "\"A... an Earth federation...?", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s19/00/girlC99006", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "　地球連邦は負けちゃうの？」", - NULL, " Will the Terran Federation lose?\"", Line_Normal); + OutputLine(NULL, "　私達、宇宙人と戦争でもしてるんですか？」", + NULL, " Are we really at war with aliens?\"", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); From 54d64324cdffb3e97a4ff1c1bd65d4be6905303d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Fri, 20 Nov 2015 20:52:24 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 07/10] trademark censorship continuation I... I think this is the end of it. *wipes brow* --- Update/onik_004.txt | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_004.txt b/Update/onik_004.txt index e8eac07..bafe687 100644 --- a/Update/onik_004.txt +++ b/Update/onik_004.txt @@ -2234,7 +2234,7 @@ void main() NULL, " And they plan to drop 100 of them next!!", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s19/01/hr_kei05920", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "　地球軍の完全な誤算だッ！！」", - NULL, " The Earth federation was totally unprepared!!\"", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); + NULL, " The Earth Federation was totally unprepared!!\"", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); PlaySE( 4, "wa_007", 128, 64 ); ShakeScreen( 0, 50, 20, 3, 0, ); @@ -2252,7 +2252,7 @@ void main() //「そ…それでどうなるの…＠　地球連邦は負けちゃうの？￥ PlaySE(3, "s19/00/girlC99005", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "「ち…地球軍って…？", - NULL, "\"A... an Earth federation...?", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "\"A... an Earth Federation...?", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s19/00/girlC99006", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "　私達、宇宙人と戦争でもしてるんですか？」", NULL, " Are we really at war with aliens?\"", Line_Normal); @@ -2261,14 +2261,14 @@ void main() //「このままでは負けるッ！＠　赤い彗星に勝てるのはヤツしかいない！＠　それが竜宮レナなのだぁッ！！＠ PlaySE(3, "s19/01/hr_kei05960", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "「このままでは負けるッ！！", - NULL, "\"If things go on like this, they will!!", Line_WaitForInput); + OutputLine(NULL, "「このままでは地球は壊滅だッ！！", + NULL, "\"If things go on like this, Earth is finished!!", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s19/01/hr_kei05970", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "　赤い彗星に勝てるのはヤツしかいない！！", - NULL, " Only one person can defeat the Red Comet!!", Line_WaitForInput); + OutputLine(NULL, "　しかし！レナなら、レナの放つ音速の『マッハレナパンチ』なら小惑星を全て迎撃することが出来る！！", + NULL, " But don't despair!! If we have Rena's ultrasonic \"Mach-Rena-Punch\", it'll be possible to intercept all of the asteroids!", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s19/01/hr_kei05980", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "　それが竜宮レナなのだぁッ！！」", - NULL, " That person is Rena Ryuugu!!\"", Line_WaitForInput); + OutputLine(NULL, "　そう、地球軍のトップエース、それが竜宮レナなのだぁッ！！」", + NULL, " That's right, the Earth Federation's top ace... is Rena Ryuugu!!\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); From c9e9028878f06648fdc0a4d75ff94188ae526e2e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Fri, 20 Nov 2015 21:01:29 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 08/10] added missing line based on the available sound files and this site: http://m-pe.tv/u/m/novel/?uid=balomu&id=4&act=viewPage&p=21&CID=1&PHPSESSID=aqenk0sbqen2nnn00tf47hvij1 --- Update/onik_004.txt | 11 +++++------ 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_004.txt b/Update/onik_004.txt index bafe687..5ca97a3 100644 --- a/Update/onik_004.txt +++ b/Update/onik_004.txt @@ -2225,7 +2225,7 @@ void main() //「あぁ、ものすごい大惨事だぞ＠　半径数百キロは壊滅だ＠　だがこれは悲劇の序章にしか過ぎない！＠　なんとこれこそは…ジオン広告社が引き起こした独立戦争の幕開けだったのだッ！！」/ PlaySE(3, "s19/01/hr_kei05890", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "「あぁ、宇宙人が作った装置でロシュの限界を解除し、まず一個落としたらしい。！", - NULL, "\"Yeah, the aliens deactivated the Roche limit with a device they created and started by hurling one asteroid", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "\"Yeah, the aliens deactivated the Roche limit with a device they created and started by hurling one asteroid.", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s19/01/hr_kei05900", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "　まさか俺もそこまでやるとは思わなかった。", NULL, " Even I didn't think that they'd go this far.", Line_WaitForInput); @@ -2271,11 +2271,10 @@ void main() NULL, " That's right, the Earth Federation's top ace... is Rena Ryuugu!!\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); - -//　下級生たちが唾をごくりと飲みこむ…＠ - OutputLine(NULL, "　下級生たちが唾をごくりと飲みこむ…！", - NULL, "The lower grade students all gulped...!", Line_WaitForInput); - OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); + PlaySE(3, "s19/00/girla99005", 256, 64); + OutputLine(NULL, "　「やっぱり、上級生は私たちと違うんだ～」", + NULL, "\"So the older kids really ARE different!\"", Line_WaitForInput); + OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_WaitForInput); From c457919f40e5fa6c0fc084ebf7d9bf7278c3bf72 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Fri, 20 Nov 2015 21:11:17 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 09/10] changed lines continue... also.. why the heck are you saying "moon", kid? really? >.> --- Update/onik_004.txt | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_004.txt b/Update/onik_004.txt index 5ca97a3..c8d2713 100644 --- a/Update/onik_004.txt +++ b/Update/onik_004.txt @@ -2309,8 +2309,8 @@ void main() //「でも…連邦艦隊の拡散波動砲でも、彗星帝国には効かなかったんじゃ…。＠ PlaySE(3, "s19/00/girlA99006", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "「でも…連邦艦隊の拡散波動砲でも、彗星帝国には効かなかったんじゃ…。」", - NULL, "\"But... I thought even the Terran Federation's Impulse Wave Diffusal Cannon... didn't work on the Comet Empire...\"", Line_WaitForInput); + OutputLine(NULL, "「でも…たとえレナさんでも、月を押し戻すことなんて出来るんでしょうか？＞」", + NULL, "\"But... Rena-san might be strong... but, can she really push back the moon..?\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); From 83815e0d360e22b62f19619ed6abb28e800d7a4c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Fri, 20 Nov 2015 21:35:38 +0000 Subject: [PATCH 10/10] matching translation to voicing --- Update/onik_004.txt | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_004.txt b/Update/onik_004.txt index c8d2713..3a7ce57 100644 --- a/Update/onik_004.txt +++ b/Update/onik_004.txt @@ -2317,14 +2317,14 @@ void main() //「惜しいな。それは白い方の彗星だぞ＠効かなかったのは弱点を知らなかったからだ＠もちろんレナは白色彗星の弱点だって熟知してる！＠ PlaySE(3, "s19/01/hr_kei06000", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "「惜しいな。それは白い方の彗星だぞ。", - NULL, "\"You're close. That's the white variety of those comets.", Line_WaitForInput); + OutputLine(NULL, "「心配無用だ！", + NULL, "\"Unnecessary concerns!", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s19/01/hr_kei06010", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "効かなかったのは弱点を知らなかったからだ。", - NULL, " The reason it didn't work was because they didn't know the weak point.", Line_WaitForInput); + OutputLine(NULL, "つい先日も、レナは地球に激突するはずの彗星爆弾を、一つ弾き飛ばしている。", + NULL, " Just days ago, Rena blew away a comet bomb that was going to smash into Earth.", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s19/01/hr_kei06020", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "もちろんレナは白色彗星の弱点だって熟知してる！」", - NULL, " Of course, Rena knows their weak point all too well!\"", Line_WaitForInput); + OutputLine(NULL, "小惑星の百個や二百個くらい、音速を超える光速のパンチで一撃だぁぁ！！」", + NULL, " One or two hundred asteroids are nothing before one of her light-speed punches!\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); @@ -2463,8 +2463,8 @@ void main() OutputLine(NULL, "「みんなが何を言ってるのかわかんないよ！", NULL, "\"What are you all saying!?", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s19/02/990200257", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "　レナはロボットの操縦なんか出来ないよー！」", - NULL, " I can't control a mech!\"", Line_Normal); + OutputLine(NULL, "　レナはパンチで小惑星なんか破壊出来ないよぅー！」", + NULL, " I can't destroy asteroids by punching them!\"", Line_Normal); ClearMessage();