diff --git a/Update/onik_001.txt b/Update/onik_001.txt index 93dd116..bd59b4d 100644 --- a/Update/onik_001.txt +++ b/Update/onik_001.txt @@ -897,7 +897,7 @@ void main() //魅音の手が地上1mくらいのところで揺れる。 OutputLine(NULL, "魅音の手が地上1mくらいのところで揺れる。", - NULL, "Mion waved her hand at a place roughly 1 meter above the ground.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "Mion waved her hand roughly 1 meter above the ground.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); //「俺は先月引っ越してきたばかりなんだが……?」 @@ -987,7 +987,7 @@ void main() //そう言って、不敵に笑う魅音の肩を俺はポンと叩く OutputLine(NULL, "そう言って、不敵に笑う魅音の肩を俺はポンと叩く", - NULL, "Picking my interest, I put my hand on her shoulder while she was still smirking.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "Picking my interest, I placed my hand on her shoulder while she was still smirking.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); //「……ちなみにレナのスリーサイズは?」 @@ -1007,7 +1007,7 @@ void main() //「……ちなみにレナのスリーサイズは?」 PlaySE(3, "s19/03/990300013", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, " ちなみに高いよ~、いくら出す?」", - NULL, " By the way, it's expensive. How much would you pay?\"", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, " By the way, it's expensive~. How much would you pay?\"", Line_WaitForInput); ClearMessage(); //よからぬ交渉に感づいたのか、レナが慌てふためきながらまくし立てた。@