From a9957fa5dc6f6d22d61a4767e64a7866afa037e7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Tue, 1 Dec 2015 18:36:15 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] phrasing "remnants" makes it sound like parts of her body, when this is not the case. --- Update/onik_011.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_011.txt b/Update/onik_011.txt index 4edfdb7..c0f439b 100644 --- a/Update/onik_011.txt +++ b/Update/onik_011.txt @@ -3566,7 +3566,7 @@ void main() //　…ダイバーが沼に潜りいくつかの遺品を回収したが肝心の死体は発見できなかった＠ OutputLine(NULL, "　…ダイバーが沼に潜りいくつかの遺品を回収したが肝心の死体は発見できなかった。", - NULL, "...A diver was able to recover a few remnants, but they weren't able to find a body.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "...A diver was able to recover a few of her articles, but they weren't able to find a body.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);