From d089c12ee1c42ce920a33696ea3d7ee4caf048f7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Tue, 17 Nov 2015 17:40:13 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] flow and consistency improvement This is closer to the Japanese intent and the original translation did not make sense with the following line calling this a "wise-crack" --- Update/onik_001.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_001.txt b/Update/onik_001.txt index 02d64bb..df0189d 100644 --- a/Update/onik_001.txt +++ b/Update/onik_001.txt @@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ void main() //「早起きしないと朝飯を食いそびれるんだよ。＠ PlaySE(3, "s19/01/hr_kei00000", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "「早起きしないと朝飯を食いそびれるんだよ。」", - NULL, "\"If I don't wake up early, I won't have time to eat breakfast.\"", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "\"If I don't get up early, I don't make it in time for your early breakfasts!\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);