From dd76d9f4e824c9a36a914bf347c32907143c055d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Norgus Date: Sat, 21 Nov 2015 11:33:19 +0000 Subject: [PATCH] phrasing flows better as 1 sentence and avoids repeating "I" YET AGAIN --- Update/onik_004.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_004.txt b/Update/onik_004.txt index a4c6d35..201ac52 100644 --- a/Update/onik_004.txt +++ b/Update/onik_004.txt @@ -3396,7 +3396,7 @@ void main() //　足場が不安定にも翻弄され、俺は早々にへばり、休憩を挟むことにした￥ OutputLine(NULL, "　足場が不安定にも翻弄され、俺は早々にへばり、休憩を挟むことにした。", - NULL, "Because the spot where I was standing was so unstable, I soon became tired. I decided to take a break.", Line_Normal); + NULL, "Because the spot where I was standing was so unstable, I soon became tired and decided to take a break.", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); DisableWindow();