From 4a88b63bd3d00c1576b17945e7ae30e6f4f6cb24 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Cnnctr Date: Sat, 30 May 2015 13:36:25 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Updated the rewritten scene I tried. If anything, at least japanese lines were added along the 1m line. I'm not native english speaker either, so check it if it's ok. --- Update/onik_001.txt | 76 ++++++++++++++++++++++++--------------------- 1 file changed, 40 insertions(+), 36 deletions(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_001.txt b/Update/onik_001.txt index fb0ab7d..93dd116 100644 --- a/Update/onik_001.txt +++ b/Update/onik_001.txt @@ -891,15 +891,20 @@ void main() OutputLine(NULL, "　そうだっけか。", NULL, " You don't say.", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s19/03/990300006", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "前に会った時はあんなに可愛かったのになぁ！」", + OutputLine(NULL, " 前に会った時はあんなに可愛かったのになぁ！」", NULL, " You were such a cute little tyke the last time I saw you!\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); +//魅音の手が地上1mくらいのところで揺れる。 + OutputLine(NULL, "魅音の手が地上1mくらいのところで揺れる。", + NULL, "Mion waved her hand at a place roughly 1 meter above the ground.", Line_WaitForInput); + OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); + //「俺は先月引っ越してきたばかりなんだが……？」 - PlaySE(3, "s19/01/HR_KEI00230", 256, 64); + PlaySE(3, "s19/01/hr_kei00230", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "「俺は先月引っ越してきたばかりなんだが……？」", - NULL, "\"But you've only known me for a month...?\"", Line_Normal); - ClearMessage(); + NULL, "\"But you've only known me for a month...\"", Line_Normal); + ClearMessage(); DisableWindow(); DrawBustshot( 3, "me_se_to_a1", 160, 0, 0, FALSE, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 20, 200, TRUE ); @@ -912,54 +917,54 @@ void main() NULL, " All the trouble this old man had to go through was worth it.\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); -//Barato - OutputLine(NULL, "???", +//ご丁寧にハンカチまで取り出して泣きまねをする。 + OutputLine(NULL, "ご丁寧にハンカチまで取り出して泣きまねをする。", NULL, "She gently took out a handkerchief and pretended to weep into it.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); -//Barato - OutputLine(NULL, "???", +//朝から土曜8時のノリかよ。 + OutputLine(NULL, "朝から土曜8時のノリかよ。", NULL, "Just what is she trying to pull off at 8 o'clock in the morning...?", Line_Normal); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); ClearMessage(); //「誰が苦労したんだ誰が」 - PlaySE(3, "S19/01/HR_KEI00240", 256, 64); + PlaySE(3, "s19/01/hr_kei00240", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "「誰が苦労したんだ誰が」", - NULL, "\"Trouble? No one went though any trouble!\"", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "\"Wasn't it me who went through the trouble there?!\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); //「たくましくなっちゃった上に、ヒゲまで生やしちゃってさぁ～」 - PlaySE(3, "S19/03/990300008", 256, 64); + PlaySE(3, "s19/03/990300008", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "「たくましくなっちゃった上に、ヒゲまで生やしちゃってさぁ～」", - NULL, "\"You've grown up so much, you even have a beard~☆\"", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "\"You've grown up so much, you even have a beard~!\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); //「まだヒゲなんか生えるかっ！」 - PlaySE(3, "S19/01/HR_KEI00250", 256, 64); + PlaySE(3, "s19/01/hr_kei00250", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "「まだヒゲなんか生えるかっ！」", NULL, "\"My beard hasn't started growing yet!\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); //「いや、生えてるね。先週ヒゲ剃り買ったでしょ？」 - PlaySE(3, "S19/03/990300009", 256, 64); + PlaySE(3, "s19/03/990300009", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "「いや、生えてるね。先週ヒゲ剃り買ったでしょ？」", NULL, "\"No, it's already growing. You got yourself a razor for it last week, right?\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); //「いや、生えてるね。先週ヒゲ剃り買ったでしょ？」 - PlaySE(3, "S19/01/HR_KEI00260", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "「いや、生えてるね。先週ヒゲ剃り買ったでしょ？」", - NULL, "\"I'll have you know, you old geezer... Wait, HOW DO YOU KNOW THAT?\"", Line_Normal); + PlaySE(3, "s19/01/hr_kei00260", 256, 64); + OutputLine(NULL, "「あれは、親父の……って、何でお前が知ってる？」", + NULL, "\"That was my father's... Wait, how do you know that?\"", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); -//Barato - OutputLine(NULL, "???", +//その問いに、魅音はちっちっち、と人差し指を目の前で振った。 + OutputLine(NULL, "その問いに、魅音はちっちっち、と人差し指を目の前で振った。", NULL, "Mion sneered at the question, and then wagged her index finger right in my face.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); - OutputLine(NULL, "???", + OutputLine(NULL, "……何の真似だ。", NULL, "...Just what is she playing at?", Line_Normal); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); @@ -968,25 +973,25 @@ void main() DrawBustshot( 3, "me_se_fu_a2", 160, 0, 0, FALSE, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 20, 200, TRUE ); //「あっはっはっは、魅音さんの情報収集能力を舐めちゃあいけないよ？圭ちゃんの昨日の夕食からレナのスリーサイズまで、すべておじさんはお見通しさ」 - PlaySE(3, "S19/03/990300010", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "「あっはっはっは、魅音さんの情報収集能力を舐めちゃあいけないよ？」", + PlaySE(3, "s19/03/990300010", 256, 64); + OutputLine(NULL, "「あっはっはっは、魅音さんの情報収集能力を舐めちゃあいけないよ？", NULL, "\"Hahaha, NEVER underestimate Mion-san's intelligence gathering skills!", Line_WaitForInput); - PlaySE(3, "S19/03/990300011", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "「圭ちゃんの昨日の夕食からレナのスリーサイズまで、すべておじさんはお見通しさ」", - NULL, " Kei-chan, from your last meal to Rena's measurements, this old man knows it all.\"", Line_WaitForInput); + PlaySE(3, "s19/03/990300011", 256, 64); + OutputLine(NULL, " 圭ちゃんの昨日の夕食からレナのスリーサイズまで、すべておじさんはお見通しさ」", + NULL, " From your last meal to Rena's measurements, this old man knows it all.\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); DisableWindow(); DrawBustshot( 3, "me_se_to_a1", 160, 0, 0, FALSE, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 200, TRUE ); -//Barato - OutputLine(NULL, "???", - NULL, "Mion then smacked my shoulder, smirking at me with a suggestive grin.", Line_WaitForInput); +//そう言って、不敵に笑う魅音の肩を俺はポンと叩く + OutputLine(NULL, "そう言って、不敵に笑う魅音の肩を俺はポンと叩く", + NULL, "Picking my interest, I put my hand on her shoulder while she was still smirking.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); //「……ちなみにレナのスリーサイズは？」 - PlaySE(3, "S19/01/HR_KEI00270", 256, 64); + PlaySE(3, "s19/01/hr_kei00270", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "「……ちなみにレナのスリーサイズは？」", NULL, "\"...I'll bite, what are Rena's measurements?\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); @@ -995,19 +1000,18 @@ void main() DrawBustshot( 3, "me_se_fu_a1", 160, 0, 0, FALSE, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 200, TRUE ); //「……ちなみにレナのスリーサイズは？」 - PlaySE(3, "S19/03/990300012", 256, 64); + PlaySE(3, "s19/03/990300012", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "「やっぱ気になるぅ？", NULL, "\"Just as I thought, you really want to knoooow?", Line_WaitForInput); //「……ちなみにレナのスリーサイズは？」 - PlaySE(3, "S19/03/990300013", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "ちなみに高いよ～、いくら出す？」", - NULL, " Take a guess, how big do you think they are?\"", Line_WaitForInput); + PlaySE(3, "s19/03/990300013", 256, 64); + OutputLine(NULL, " ちなみに高いよ～、いくら出す？」", + NULL, " By the way, it's expensive. How much would you pay?\"", Line_WaitForInput); ClearMessage(); -//　俺がジッパーに手をかけたところで、レナが慌てふためきながらまくし立てた＠ - OutputLine(NULL, "　俺がジッパーに手をかけたところで、レナが慌てふためきながらまくし立てた。", -// NULL, "As my hand reached for my fly, Rena began to ramble in a near panic.", Line_WaitForInput); +//よからぬ交渉に感づいたのか、レナが慌てふためきながらまくし立てた。＠ + OutputLine(NULL, "よからぬ交渉に感づいたのか、レナが慌てふためきながらまくし立てた。", NULL, "Catching on to our awful discussion, Rena became flustered and began to ramble in a near panic.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);