From 8793268ad5b8a9ee571e1288d5109e618c589c1f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Cnnctr Date: Mon, 1 Jun 2015 22:20:09 +0200 Subject: [PATCH 1/2] more tweaks to the rewritten scene --- Update/onik_001.txt | 27 ++++++++++++++------------- 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_001.txt b/Update/onik_001.txt index 735866a..063c7c4 100644 --- a/Update/onik_001.txt +++ b/Update/onik_001.txt @@ -891,13 +891,13 @@ void main() OutputLine(NULL, "　そうだっけか。", NULL, " You don't say.", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s19/03/990300006", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, " 前に会った時はあんなに可愛かったのになぁ！」", + OutputLine(NULL, "　前に会った時はあんなに可愛かったのになぁ！」", NULL, " You were such a cute little tyke the last time I saw you!\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); //魅音の手が地上1mくらいのところで揺れる。 - OutputLine(NULL, "魅音の手が地上1mくらいのところで揺れる。", - NULL, ""Mion then lowered her hand to about 1 meter above the ground.", Line_WaitForInput); + OutputLine(NULL, "　魅音の手が地上1mくらいのところで揺れる。", + NULL, "Mion then lowered her hand to about 1 meter above the ground.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); //「俺は先月引っ越してきたばかりなんだが……？」 @@ -918,12 +918,12 @@ void main() OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); //ご丁寧にハンカチまで取り出して泣きまねをする。 - OutputLine(NULL, "ご丁寧にハンカチまで取り出して泣きまねをする。", + OutputLine(NULL, "　ご丁寧にハンカチまで取り出して泣きまねをする。", NULL, "She gently took out a handkerchief and pretended to weep into it.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); //朝から土曜8時のノリかよ。 - OutputLine(NULL, "朝から土曜8時のノリかよ。", + OutputLine(NULL, "　朝から土曜8時のノリかよ。", NULL, "Just what is she trying to pull off at 8 o'clock in the morning...?", Line_Normal); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); @@ -961,10 +961,10 @@ void main() ClearMessage(); //その問いに、魅音はちっちっち、と人差し指を目の前で振った。 - OutputLine(NULL, "その問いに、魅音はちっちっち、と人差し指を目の前で振った。", + OutputLine(NULL, "　その問いに、魅音はちっちっち、と人差し指を目の前で振った。", NULL, "Mion sneered at the question, and then wagged her index finger right in my face.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); - OutputLine(NULL, "……何の真似だ。", + OutputLine(NULL, "　……何の真似だ。", NULL, "...Just what is she playing at?", Line_Normal); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); @@ -976,17 +976,18 @@ void main() PlaySE(3, "s19/03/990300010", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, "「あっはっはっは、魅音さんの情報収集能力を舐めちゃあいけないよ？", NULL, "\"Hahaha, NEVER underestimate Mion-san's intelligence gathering skills!", Line_WaitForInput); + + + DisableWindow(); + DrawBustshot( 3, "me_se_to_a1", 160, 0, 0, FALSE, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 200, TRUE ); PlaySE(3, "s19/03/990300011", 256, 64); OutputLine(NULL, " 圭ちゃんの昨日の夕食からレナのスリーサイズまで、すべておじさんはお見通しさ」", NULL, " From your last meal to Rena's measurements, this old man knows it all.\"", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); - DisableWindow(); - DrawBustshot( 3, "me_se_to_a1", 160, 0, 0, FALSE, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 200, TRUE ); - //そう言って、不敵に笑う魅音の肩を俺はポンと叩く - OutputLine(NULL, "そう言って、不敵に笑う魅音の肩を俺はポンと叩く", + OutputLine(NULL, "　そう言って、不敵に笑う魅音の肩を俺はポンと叩く", NULL, "Picking my interest, I placed my hand on her shoulder while she was still smirking.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); @@ -1006,12 +1007,12 @@ void main() //「……ちなみにレナのスリーサイズは？」 PlaySE(3, "s19/03/990300013", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, " ちなみに高いよ～、いくら出す？」", + OutputLine(NULL, "　ちなみに高いよ～、いくら出す？」", NULL, " By the way, it's expensive~. How much would you pay?\"", Line_WaitForInput); ClearMessage(); //よからぬ交渉に感づいたのか、レナが慌てふためきながらまくし立てた。＠ - OutputLine(NULL, "よからぬ交渉に感づいたのか、レナが慌てふためきながらまくし立てた。", + OutputLine(NULL, "　よからぬ交渉に感づいたのか、レナが慌てふためきながらまくし立てた。", NULL, "Catching on to our awful discussion, Rena became flustered and began to ramble in a near panic.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); From 0ad12e200a6cfcc8bf304dfc02cbfbecd40df288 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Cnnctr Date: Mon, 1 Jun 2015 22:28:30 +0200 Subject: [PATCH 2/2] Update onik_009.txt Rori in Japanese changed to chibikko so it matches the voice. Changed timing in the same scene to go better with the voice. --- Update/onik_009.txt | 12 ++++++------ 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_009.txt b/Update/onik_009.txt index 16f4b4c..7405a49 100644 --- a/Update/onik_009.txt +++ b/Update/onik_009.txt @@ -1997,12 +1997,12 @@ void main() OutputLine(NULL, "どこまで取っても一部の隙もない。", NULL, " Not a single element was overlooked.", Line_WaitForInput); PlaySE(3, "s19/01/HR_KEI33830_01", 256, 64); - OutputLine(NULL, "ロリ！", + OutputLine(NULL, "ちびっ子！", NULL, " Loli!", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); PlaySE( 4, "wa_010", 128, 64 ); SetValidityOfInput( FALSE ); - Wait( 400 ); + Wait( 1000 ); SetValidityOfInput( TRUE ); //巫女！/ @@ -2011,7 +2011,7 @@ void main() NULL, " Shrine maiden!", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); PlaySE( 4, "wa_029", 128, 64 ); SetValidityOfInput( FALSE ); - Wait( 400 ); + Wait( 1000 ); SetValidityOfInput( TRUE ); //半涙！/ @@ -2020,7 +2020,7 @@ void main() NULL, " Brink of crying!", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); PlaySE( 4, "wa_012", 128, 64 ); SetValidityOfInput( FALSE ); - Wait( 400 ); + Wait( 1000 ); SetValidityOfInput( TRUE ); //みぃ！/ @@ -2029,7 +2029,7 @@ void main() NULL, " Mew!", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); PlaySE( 4, "wa_016", 128, 64 ); SetValidityOfInput( FALSE ); - Wait( 400 ); + Wait( 1000 ); SetValidityOfInput( TRUE ); //完璧だッ！！/ @@ -2038,7 +2038,7 @@ void main() NULL, " It was perfect!!", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); PlaySE( 4, "wa_007", 128, 64 ); SetValidityOfInput( FALSE ); - Wait( 1000 ); + Wait( 1100 ); SetValidityOfInput( TRUE ); //ただのコケを萌えにまで昇華した…!w500これぞまさに芸術と呼ぶに相応しいッ！！＠