Norgus
ec384f60b1
fixed english
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written as though 3 boys shared one head...
2015-12-19 17:28:55 +00:00
Norgus
858d28c4d1
fixed punctuation
2015-12-19 17:06:50 +00:00
Ítalo Bruno Andrade
19062031a4
Merge pull request #59 from Norgus/master
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Master
2015-12-18 19:58:51 -02:00
Norgus
1bc472ac39
changed Rena's weapon to a hatchet to match the images
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the pictures of Rena with a weapon have her with a hatchet, and upon
checking - the Sui script does indeed have her weapon as 鉈 (hatchet).
This isn't a mindless find-replace, I've gone through making sure I only
change instances of 斧/axe which are relevant (the card game axe remains
an axe, and one of the murder weapons at the dam site remains an axe)
2015-12-18 21:54:52 +00:00
Norgus
eedd30f29f
removed line not in Sui
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The text still makes sense without this line, so I guess it works better
to remove it than have one weird silent part.
2015-12-18 21:12:29 +00:00
Norgus
5396ced6ed
translation fix
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got confirmation of my interpretation of this part from a Japanese
player, Pent, on the forums
http://steamcommunity.com/app/310360/discussions/0/492379439673434273/
2015-12-18 19:48:38 +00:00
Ítalo Bruno Andrade
bb58c2ac04
Merge pull request #58 from Norgus/master
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Master
2015-12-16 15:17:12 -02:00
Norgus
b30cce8088
added line from Sui
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The script didn't flow very well without this line after removing the
voiced part (missing Mom voice due to different script in Sui), so added
it in and translated.
2015-12-16 09:05:19 +00:00
Ítalo Bruno Andrade
7f4e829e50
Merge pull request #57 from Norgus/master
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some tips
2015-12-14 18:01:44 -02:00
Norgus
217126bd98
timing & script matching to Sui version
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Keiichi's mother doesn't speak in Sui, so there's some added text lines
to replace those parts.
2015-12-14 19:47:53 +00:00
Norgus
36fc436234
matched to Sui text
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this line is changed a bit in exchange for Keiichi's mother not speaking
here
2015-12-14 17:54:33 +00:00
Norgus
5ca94cae09
audio message timing
2015-12-14 17:45:30 +00:00
Norgus
0f0f8a6ab7
audio timing
2015-12-12 13:31:01 +00:00
Norgus
adaee53849
translation fix
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He certainly has not forgiven Rena at this point, so "did" is completely
baseless (plus the Japanese isn't in past tense)
2015-12-12 13:23:01 +00:00
Norgus
4250aef3f6
translation fix
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this mistranslation also causes an inconsistency with later text
describing Keiichi as about to close the window...
2015-12-12 13:15:47 +00:00
Norgus
183c0bcd3c
typo fix
2015-12-12 13:13:09 +00:00
Norgus
4ff3393a4f
translation fix
2015-12-12 13:12:13 +00:00
Norgus
e19204dcac
wording
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I felt this was just too difficult to read and parse
2015-12-12 13:09:43 +00:00
Norgus
41728d3ce6
translation fixes
2015-12-12 13:01:59 +00:00
Norgus
96d43a4f47
translation fix
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as changed in the script for day 12
2015-12-12 12:57:01 +00:00
Norgus
027a43fb02
translation fix
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he's trying to will himself to action, not say that Rena is provoking
him
2015-12-12 12:34:39 +00:00
Norgus
cae6019e27
translation fix
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it's inconsequential, but it bugs me that the translation was the exact
opposite of the meaning.
2015-12-12 12:01:24 +00:00
Norgus
913db8a0b6
wording
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rather than the verb "eat" being "quick", it's the time taken to prepare
that she's saying it quick
2015-12-12 11:58:33 +00:00
Norgus
03f44fdda5
translation nuance fix
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the Japanese doesn't say pouting, and I think pouting is kind of the
wrong expression for the moment
2015-12-12 11:53:16 +00:00
Norgus
9a52245fcc
tense issue
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Keiichi just discovered that his "escape" line of thought was wrong, so
"had tried" seems appropriate.
2015-12-12 11:49:05 +00:00
Norgus
e63cbc95b2
redundant wording
2015-12-12 11:43:07 +00:00
Norgus
daaf57ceb4
English fix
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"back then" is an expression used when reminiscing about something that
happened long ago, not referring back to a recent incident.
2015-12-12 11:38:52 +00:00
Norgus
8ed6d5359a
fixed wording
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literal translation of the words rather than what he's saying was
awkward
2015-12-12 11:33:37 +00:00
Norgus
ad2742aed7
nuance change
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Keiichi isn't actually expecting there to definitely be more phone
calls, just that he'd have to deal with "any" that do come.
2015-12-12 11:26:55 +00:00
Norgus
fd9c87d22a
English fix
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removed redundant "or not" from the expression effectively saying
"whether or not or not"
2015-12-12 11:13:18 +00:00
Norgus
91796c1eaa
English fix
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"mostly" and "than" really don't work together like this...
2015-12-12 11:00:33 +00:00
Ítalo Bruno Andrade
16212a03cc
Merge pull request #56 from Norgus/master
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Master
2015-12-10 19:16:32 -02:00
Norgus
617eb7886a
timing, text flow & matching to Sui audio
2015-12-10 19:54:49 +00:00
Norgus
3de6d555aa
wording
2015-12-10 19:07:43 +00:00
Norgus
5cf4bc3b24
wording
2015-12-10 19:05:44 +00:00
Norgus
8cbd8a3c87
translation fix
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got the person smiling wrong
2015-12-10 18:50:08 +00:00
Norgus
71c9b13c7b
Revert "translation fix"
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This reverts commit 185efe0ad8
2015-12-10 18:48:39 +00:00
Norgus
185efe0ad8
translation fix
2015-12-10 18:44:44 +00:00
Norgus
618367e863
translation fix
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pretty inconsequential, but meh!
2015-12-10 18:43:41 +00:00
Norgus
ceeaf17d9f
translation fix
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continuation of fix made to earlier scripts
2015-12-10 18:17:26 +00:00
Norgus
b9d9eb8b76
wording
2015-12-10 18:14:28 +00:00
Ítalo Bruno Andrade
6a96d525bc
Merge pull request #55 from Norgus/master
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Master
2015-12-08 21:10:21 -02:00
Norgus
784a0d99dc
text flow/timing
2015-12-08 18:21:54 +00:00
Norgus
3e4de41c95
translation fix & matching to audio
2015-12-08 18:04:50 +00:00
Norgus
4cb391570e
translation fix
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This is a line which helps explain Keiichi's elevated panic when his
parent's are out.
2015-12-08 17:39:20 +00:00
Norgus
bcf140b09a
translation fix
2015-12-08 17:32:24 +00:00
Norgus
1b85711c3b
wording
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to me it feels unnatural for internal monologue to be saying "you know?"
2015-12-08 17:23:13 +00:00
Norgus
1ad932333f
nuance fix
2015-12-08 17:20:06 +00:00
Norgus
5a7fb7c494
double spacing
2015-12-08 17:17:22 +00:00
Norgus
fb07cfe105
translation fix
2015-12-08 17:11:28 +00:00
