my notes :
Chapter 1 :
-Rena's face is smiling when she should be piqued. <<you're so cold, Keiichi>>. FIXED
-Rena's face blushing <<Her face flushed red>> before. FIXED
-Rena's face surprised blush <<forever>> before. FIXED
-Rena's face defensive blush <<never read any>> before. FIXED
-<<Morning Rena>> Mion, comma missing. FIXED
-Mion's face closed eyes, hand out <<Rena's measurements>> before. replace. FIXED
-Mion's face open eyes, hand out << really wanna know eh?>> before. replace. FIXED
-<<But in the end nothing more than>> comma missing FIXED
-<<but they're sho kyute?>> timing. FIXED
-<<just looking, that should be fine>> timing. edit : no sound file??? WILL BE FIXED
-Mion's face smiling, closed eyes, hand out <<we managed it!>> replace. FIXED
-<<Rise. Attention>> Mion's face, open eyes, hand in. replace. FIXED
-<<with these marks...>> timing too slow. FIXED
-Mion's face, sly eyes, hand in. <<not enough to weed em out>> before. FIXED
-Rika's face, slight smile <<Itadakimasu!>> before. FIXED
-<<everyone liked it so much, I made more>> Rena name missing. FIXED
-<<yellow one is>> lower the timing. FIXED
-<<but the green one>> lower the timing. FIXED
-<<uwwwwaaaan>> lower the timing. FIXED
-<<supersonic speeds>> no s at speed. FIXED
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