Merge pull request #57 from Norgus/master

some tips

Update/onik_014_02.txt

@@ -220,7 +220,7 @@ void main()
 
 //　もっとも野生に近い全ての知覚が背後の気配を警告し、もっとも理性的な一般常識が、俺の背後の気配を気のせいだと否定する＠
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　もっとも野生に近い全ての知覚が背後の気配を警告し、もっとも理性的な一般常識が、俺の背後の気配を気のせいだと否定する。",
-		   NULL, "It was mostly instinct than anything else that was warning me of that presence. Common sense was telling me that it was just my imagination.", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "My most base instincts were warning me of the presence. Common sense was telling me that it was just my imagination.", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 
@@ -800,7 +800,7 @@ void main()
 
 //　ただでさえ味方が少なく、また祟りか否かも断定できない今、そんな行為は何の得にもならない￥
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　ただでさえ味方が少なく、また祟りか否かも断定できない今、そんな行為は何の得にもならない。",
-		   NULL, "With me having so few allies to begin with and not being able to confidently declare whether or not this was a curse or not, there was no merit to doing that.", Line_Normal);
+		   NULL, "With me having so few allies to begin with and not being able to confidently declare whether or not this was a curse, there was no merit to doing that.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //　ついさっき玄関であった「事実」は俺の胸だけにしまった方がいい＠
@@ -1545,7 +1545,7 @@ void main()
 
 //　......今夜かかってくる両親への電話の対応もうまくやる必要がある＠
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　……今夜かかってくる両親への電話の対応もうまくやる必要がある。",
-		   NULL, "...I'd have to deal with more telephone calls coming in for my parents tonight.", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "...I'd have to deal with any telephone calls coming in for my parents tonight.", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 
@@ -1962,7 +1962,7 @@ void main()
 
 //　確か...針はおはぎと一緒に壁に投げつけた＠あるとすれば...やはり居間のあの壁￥
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　確か…針はおはぎと一緒に壁に投げつけた。",
-		   NULL, "I had certainly... thrown the mochi and needle at the wall together.", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "Let's see... I threw the mochi and needle at the wall together.", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "あるとすれば…やはり居間のあの壁！",
 		   NULL, " If it was there... then it would be on the living room wall!", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
@@ -2129,7 +2129,7 @@ void main()
 		   NULL, "\"...I couldn't find it...", Line_WaitForInput);
 	PlaySE(3, "s01/01/120100504", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "あの時はつい気が動転していて……。」",
-		   NULL, " I was really overwhelmed back then and...\"", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, " I was really overwhelmed when it happened and...\"", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 
@@ -2191,7 +2191,7 @@ void main()
 
 //　あの時は怒りにまかせて怒鳴りつけただけで...ナンバーは見なかった...＠
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　あの時は怒りにまかせて怒鳴りつけただけで…ナンバーは見なかった…。",
-		   NULL, "I just flipped out yelling at him back then, but I didn't look at the plate...", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "At the time, I just flipped out yelling at him, but I didn't look at the plate...", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 
@@ -2411,7 +2411,7 @@ void main()
 
 //　レナたちが犯人であるという説の他に、オヤシロさまの祟りが実在する、という説も残されているのだ......＠
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　レナたちが犯人であるという説の他に、オヤシロさまの祟りが実在する、という説も残されているのだ……。",
-		   NULL, "Other than the theory of it being Rena and the others, I was left with Oyashiro-sama's curse actually existing as the only other explanation...", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "Other than the theory of it being Rena and the others, I was left with Oyashiro-sama's curse actually existing as the only explanation...", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 
@@ -2812,7 +2812,7 @@ void main()
 
 //　......お袋の友人だろうと、一番無難な想像をして"逃げていた"￥
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　……お袋の友人だろうと、一番無難な想像をして“逃げていた”。",
-		   NULL, "...I tried to \"escape\" by imagining it was the easiest person to deal with: one of my mom's friends.", Line_Normal);
+		   NULL, "...I had tried to \"escape\" by imagining it was the easiest person to deal with: one of my mom's friends.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //■レナの訪問
@@ -2962,7 +2962,7 @@ void main()
 
 //　レナはとても悲しそうにうつむく＠
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　レナはとても悲しそうにうつむく。",
-		   NULL, "Rena pouted rather sadly.", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "Rena looked at the ground sadly.", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 
@@ -3117,7 +3117,7 @@ void main()
 //「ご飯も持ってきてあげたから、レンジで温めればすぐ食べられるし☆＠
 	PlaySE(3, "s01/02/120200271", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「ご飯も持ってきてあげたから、レンジで暖めればすぐ食べられるし☆」",
-		   NULL, "\"I also brought rice, so if you microwave it, you can eat it really quickly☆\"", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "\"I also brought rice, so if you microwave it, it'll be ready to eat in no time ☆\"", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 
@@ -3162,7 +3162,7 @@ void main()
 
 //　これに比べたら、俗に言う八百屋野菜などは大味でダメだ＠
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　これに比べたら、俗に言う八百屋野菜などは大味でダメだ！",
-		   NULL, "The vegetables from the supermarket were tasteless and bland compared to these!", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "Those so-called supermarket vegetables taste rough and overpowering in comparison!", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 
@@ -4471,7 +4471,7 @@ void main()
 
 //　俺の胸の中の...しけった火薬に必死になってライターで火をつける＠何度も試す＠かちゃかちゃと＠...だがつかない＠...つかない...￥
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　俺の胸の中の…しけった火薬に必死になってライターで火をつける。",
-		   NULL, "She was doing her hardest to light the fuse to the powder keg in my heart...", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "I tried my hardest to light the fuse to the powder keg in my heart...", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "何度も試す。",
 		   NULL, " Trying again and again.", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "かちゃかちゃと。",
@@ -5580,7 +5580,7 @@ void main()
 	OutputLine(NULL, "……全てが真実ではないかもしれないということです。",
 		   NULL, " Not all of it may be true...", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
-	Wait( 1000 );
+	Wait( 3200 );
 
 	OutputLine(NULL, "……よろしいですね？」",
 		   NULL, " Are you still interested?\"", Line_WaitForInput);
@@ -5743,7 +5743,7 @@ void main()
 
 //　それが小学校に上がる時に遠くの、茨城へ引越しした＠
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　それが小学校に上がる時に遠くの、茨城へ引越しした。",
-		   NULL, "She had moved to Ibaraki Prefecture after she finished elementary school.", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "She had moved to Ibaraki Prefecture just before starting elementary school.", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 
@@ -5774,7 +5774,7 @@ void main()
 
 //　これだけが俺が知る全てだ￥
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　これだけが俺が知る全てだ。",
-		   NULL, "This was all that he knew.", Line_Normal);
+		   NULL, "This was everything I knew.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 	DisableWindow();
 	FadeBustshotWithFiltering( 5, "up", 0, FALSE, 0, 0, 1300, TRUE );
@@ -5803,7 +5803,7 @@ void main()
 
 //　...転校直前に引き起こした事件についてだ￥
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　…転校直前に引き起こした事件についてだ。",
-		   NULL, "...It was the incident that happened just after she transferred.", Line_Normal);
+		   NULL, "...It was the incident right before she transferred back to Hinamizawa.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //「レナが起こした事件と、...その後の医者での告白、!w500...ですね？＠
@@ -5912,14 +5912,14 @@ void main()
 		   NULL, "\"...That Oyashiro-sama's curse...", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 	SetValidityOfInput( FALSE );
-	Wait( 500 );
+	Wait( 1800 );
 	SetValidityOfInput( TRUE );
 
 	OutputLine(NULL, "本当にあるのかな",
 		   NULL, " really exists...", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 	SetValidityOfInput( FALSE );
-	Wait( 400 );
+	Wait( 2600 );
 	SetValidityOfInput( TRUE );
 
 	OutputLine(NULL, "……なんて、まぁ…はっはっは…！」",
@@ -5944,7 +5944,7 @@ void main()
 
 //　...レナの過去を調べ始めるまでの経緯￥
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　…レナの過去を調べ始めるまでの経緯。",
-		   NULL, "...The course of events up until the start of delving into Rena's past.", Line_Normal);
+		   NULL, "...The course of events leading him to delve into Rena's past.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 	FadeOutBGM( 1, 1000, TRUE );
@@ -5961,14 +5961,14 @@ void main()
 
 //　本当に突然、それも叩きつけるような激しい雨だった＠
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　本当に突然、それも叩きつけるような激しい雨だった。",
-		   NULL, "It came without warning, rain so heavy it felt like it could beat you down.", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "It came without warning, a downpour fiercely beating the ground.", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 
 
 //　部屋の熱気を逃がすため、隙間を空けておいた窓から狂った風が踊りこみ、カーテンを騒がしくはためかせている￥
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　部屋の熱気を逃がすため、隙間を空けておいた窓から狂った風が踊りこみ、カーテンを騒がしくはためかせている。",
-		   NULL, "I had left the window in my room open a crack to let the heat out. The violent wind dance into my room, making the curtains flap wildly.", Line_Normal);
+		   NULL, "I had left the window in my room open a crack to let the heat out. The violent wind danced into my room, making the curtains flap wildly.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //「どうしました？＠
@@ -5992,7 +5992,7 @@ void main()
 
 //　電話を続けながら腰を上げ、窓に手をかける￥
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　電話を続けながら腰を上げ、窓に手をかける。",
-		   NULL, "I got up while still on the phone and closed the window.", Line_Normal);
+		   NULL, "I got up while still on the phone and grasped the window.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //「始めに事件と申し上げましたが、学校側も被害者も告発してないので、正式には事件ではないのです＠
@@ -6331,7 +6331,7 @@ void main()
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　くそぉ…！！",
 		   NULL, "Dammit...!!", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　何で俺が…許さなくちゃならないんだよ！！",
-		   NULL, " Why did I... have to forgive her!?", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, " Why should I... have to forgive her!?", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 

Update/onik_tips_19.txt

@@ -40,7 +40,8 @@
 //「左様です＠そのメカニズムは完全には解明されていませんが、精神を守るために脳が行なう防御行動のひとつではないかと考えられています。￥
 	PlaySE(3, "s20/00/profA44002", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「左様です。",
-		   NULL, "\"Correct.", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "\"Correct.", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
+	Wait (1000);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "そのメカニズムは完全には解明されていませんが、精神を守るために脳が行なう防御行動のひとつではないかと考えられています。」",
 		   NULL, " The exact mechanism is not fully understood, but it's believed to be a type of defense for the brain to retain mental stability.\"", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
@@ -48,7 +49,8 @@
 //「例えば、貧乏な人がお金持ちになった自分を想像するという現実逃避ってありますよね＠　これも多重人格なわけですか？＠
 	PlaySE(3, "s20/00/repoA44003", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「例えば、貧乏な人がお金持ちになった自分を想像するという現実逃避ってありますよね？",
-		   NULL, "\"Hypothetically, poor people imagining themselves as wealthy is a form of escapism, is it not?", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "\"Hypothetically, poor people imagining themselves as wealthy is a form of escapism, is it not?", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
+	Wait (3800);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　これも多重人格なわけですか？」",
 		   NULL, " Is this also a form of multiple personality disorder?\"", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
@@ -58,7 +60,8 @@
 //「極論はできませんが、広義的にはそう解釈できます＠つまり誰にでもありえる現象なのです。￥
 	PlaySE(3, "s20/00/profA44003", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「極論はできませんが、広義的にはそう解釈できます。",
-		   NULL, "\"I wouldn't go that far, but broadly speaking, one could infer that.", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "\"I wouldn't go that far, but broadly speaking, one could infer that.", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
+	Wait (3000);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "つまり誰にでもありえる現象なのです。」",
 		   NULL, " It's something that occurs in us all.\"", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
@@ -74,7 +77,8 @@
 //「...ちょっと難しいですね＠...そう提唱する説もありますし、否定する説もあります＠諸説紛々です。￥
 	PlaySE(3, "s20/00/profA44004", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「…ちょっと難しいですね。",
-		   NULL, "\"...That's difficult to say.", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "\"...That's difficult to say.", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
+	Wait (2200);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "…そう提唱する説もありますし、否定する説もあります。",
 		   NULL, " There are some who agree with that, and some who disagree.", Line_WaitForInput);
 	PlaySE(3, "s20/00/profA44005", 256, 64);
@@ -93,7 +97,8 @@
 //「残念ながらそうなります＠今後の研究が期待されます。￥
 	PlaySE(3, "s20/00/profA44006", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「残念ながらそうなります。",
-		   NULL, "\"Unfortunately, that is the current state of things.", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "\"Unfortunately, that is the current state of things.", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
+	Wait (1600);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "今後の研究が期待されます。」",
 		   NULL, " We can only put our hope in future research.\"", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
@@ -101,7 +106,8 @@
 //「でもでも～、二重人格なんて何だかカッコイイですよね～＠　どういう人が二重人格になれるんですかぁ？￥
 	PlaySE(3, "s20/00/repoA44006", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「でもでも〜、二重人格なんて何だかカッコイイですよね〜！",
-		   NULL, "\"But, but~ It's sorta cool having a split personality~!", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "\"But, but~ It's sorta cool having a split personality~!", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
+	Wait (3000);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　どういう人が二重人格になれるんですかぁ？」",
 		   NULL, " What kind of people get split personalities?\"", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
@@ -109,7 +115,8 @@
 //「なれるといいますか...、なりやすいといいますか...＠最近の研究では、遺伝と心因が複雑に絡み合い...＠中でも幼少期の虐待が大きく作用するのではないかと言われています。＠
 	PlaySE(3, "s20/00/profA44007", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「なれるといいますか…、なりやすいといいますか…。",
-		   NULL, "\"Recent studies find that those who develop it... or rather, those who are more susceptible to developing it,", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "\"Recent studies find that those who develop it... or rather, those who are more susceptible to developing it,", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
+	Wait (1800);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "最近の研究では、遺伝と心因が複雑に絡み合い…。",
 		   NULL, " may be genetically predisposed or may have had abnormal mental development...", Line_WaitForInput);
 	PlaySE(3, "s20/00/profA44008", 256, 64);

Update/onik_tips_20.txt

@@ -19,26 +19,16 @@
 		   NULL, "The Seventh Mart was a bargain supermarket with food and alcohol.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
-//「なぁに、圭一＠こんなにたくさん＠　全部違う種類にすることはないでしょ？！＠
+//早く選べ、と急き立てる両親に悪態をつきながら、色とりどりのカップめんをどっさりとカートに載せる。
-	OutputLine(NULL, "「なぁに、圭一。",
+	OutputLine(NULL, "早く選べ、と急き立てる両親に悪態をつきながら、色とりどりのカップめんをどっさりとカートに載せる。",
-		   NULL, "\"What's this, Keiichi?", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "I flopped the colorful collection of cup noodle bowls into the cart, muttering in irritation at being rushed by my parents.", Line_Normal);
-	OutputLine(NULL, "こんなにたくさん！",
-		   NULL, " So many!", Line_WaitForInput);
-	OutputLine(NULL, "　全部違う種類にすることはないでしょ？！」",
-		   NULL, " There's no reason to get all the different kinds, is there!?\"", Line_WaitForInput);
-	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
-
-
-
-//　色とりどりのカップめんをどっさりとカートに載せたんだ￥
-	OutputLine(NULL, "　色とりどりのカップめんをどっさりとカートに載せたんだ。",
-		   NULL, "I flopped all the different colored cup noodle bowls into the cart.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //「最近のカップめんは凝ってて種類も多いんだよ＠どれも一通りは食ってみたいし。＠
 	PlaySE(3, "s20/01/440100041", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「最近のカップめんは凝ってて種類も多いんだよ。",
-		   NULL, "\"Cup noodles have gotten so elaborate recently, and there are a bunch of different types.", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "\"Cup noodles have gotten so elaborate recently, and there are a bunch of different types.", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
+	Wait (1600);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "どれも一通りは食ってみたいし。」",
 		   NULL, " I want to try each of them at least once.\"", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
@@ -51,43 +41,35 @@
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 
-
+//　あまりの量と種類に親父が渋って、バラ売りじゃなく箱で選んでこい、と言う。
-//「圭一＠箱売りしてるのにしなさい。安いから。＠
+	OutputLine(NULL, "　あまりの量と種類に親父が渋って、",
-	OutputLine(NULL, "「圭一。",
+		   NULL, "Looking displeased at the sheer amount and the number of different varieties,", Line_WaitForInput);
-		   NULL, "\"Keiichi.", Line_WaitForInput);
+	OutputLine(NULL, "　バラ売りじゃなく箱で選んでこい、と言う。",
-	OutputLine(NULL, "箱売りしてるのにしなさい。安いから。」",
+		   NULL, " Dad told me to go get a multipack instead of individual ones.", Line_WaitForInput);
-		   NULL, " Buy them in the big case. It's cheaper.\"", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 
-
-//　親父が渋る￥
-	OutputLine(NULL, "　親父が渋る。",
-		   NULL, "Dad faltered.", Line_Normal);
-	ClearMessage();
-
 //　まぁこういう展開は読めていた＠
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　まぁこういう展開は読めていた。",
 		   NULL, "Well, I had a feeling it'd end up like this.", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 
-
 //　親父が出てきたらどうしようもない￥
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　親父が出てきたらどうしようもない。",
-		   NULL, "Dad knew there was no point in him butting in.", Line_Normal);
+		   NULL, "Now that Dad had thrown his hat into the ring, I'd have to compromise.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //「それじゃ１種類しか食えないよ＠　飽きちゃうって！＠
 	PlaySE(3, "s20/01/440100042", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「それじゃ１種類しか食えないよ！",
-		   NULL, "\"Then I'd only get to eat one kind!", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "\"Then I'd only get to eat one kind!", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
+	Wait (1300);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　飽きちゃうって！」",
 		   NULL, " I'd get bored with it!\"", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 
-
 //　形式だけの抵抗だ＠
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　形式だけの抵抗だ。",
 		   NULL, "I was resisting as a formality.", Line_WaitForInput);
@@ -99,45 +81,48 @@
 		   NULL, "I had already given up inside and wasn't sure which case of noodles to get.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
-//「決められないならお母さんが決めちゃうわよ。＠
+//お袋と親父は早々にレジへ並んで、まだ売り場であれこれ迷う俺を呼んでいる。
-	OutputLine(NULL, "「決められないならお母さんが決めちゃうわよ。」",
+	OutputLine(NULL, "お袋と親父は早々にレジへ並んで、まだ売り場であれこれ迷う俺を呼んでいる。",
-		   NULL, "\"If you can't pick, then Mommy will pick for you.\"", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "Mom and Dad were already waiting in line, calling for me as I struggled with the decision.", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 
-
+//　列も長くないし、時間はない……。俺は仕方なく、手早く目当てのラーメンの箱を探しあてた。
-//　そう急かされても困る...＠
+	OutputLine(NULL, "　列も長くないし、時間はない……。",
-	OutputLine(NULL, "　そう急かされても困る…！",
+		   NULL, "The line is short, and there isn't much time...!", Line_WaitForInput);
-		   NULL, "You don't have to rush me...!", Line_WaitForInput);
+	OutputLine(NULL, "俺は仕方なく、手早く目当てのラーメンの箱を探しに行く。",
+		   NULL, " Left with no choice, I quickly search the cases of noodles for what I want.", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
-
+// 困ったときには、……そう！　豚骨ショウガ味の大盛カップ！！
-
+	OutputLine(NULL, "困ったときには、……そう！　豚骨ショウガ味の大盛カップ！！",
-//　手早く目当てのラーメンの箱を探しに行く￥
+		   NULL, "When in trouble... That's it! Pork-bone & Ginger, extra large!!", Line_Normal);
-	OutputLine(NULL, "　手早く目当てのラーメンの箱を探しに行く。",
-		   NULL, "I quickly search the cases of noodles for what I want.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
-//「豚骨ショウガ味、デカカップ＠　ねぇ圭一、もう少し普通のにしない？＠
-	OutputLine(NULL, "「豚骨ショウガ味、デカカップ？",
-		   NULL, "\"Pork -bone & Ginger, large cup?", Line_WaitForInput);
-	OutputLine(NULL, "　ねぇ圭一、もう少し普通のにしない？」",
-		   NULL, " Hey, Keiichi, can't you get a more normal one?\"", Line_WaitForInput);
-	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
-
-
 
 //　お袋に選ばせると醤油味だと塩味だの、手堅いチョイスに固まる傾向がある￥
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　お袋に選ばせると醤油味だと塩味だの、手堅いチョイスに固まる傾向がある。",
-		   NULL, "If I let Mom pick, she'd err on the side of safety and get soy sauce or salt flavored.", Line_Normal);
+		   NULL, "If I let Mom pick, she'd err on the side of safety and get soy sauce or salt flavored.", Line_WaitForInput);
+	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
+
+
+// だから豚骨の箱をどん、と買い物かごに積み込むと、『……これぇ？』と言いたげな顔で俺を見返した。
+	OutputLine(NULL, "だから豚骨の箱をどん、と買い物かごに積み込むと、『……これぇ？』と言いたげな顔で俺を見返した。",
+		   NULL, "So, when I plonked a large box of pork-bone flavor in the shopping cart, Mom looked back at me with an expression as if to say \"...These ones?\"", Line_WaitForInput);
+
+// とはいえ、これだけは譲れないとばかりに俺は、チョイスしてきた持論を展開する。
+	OutputLine(NULL, "とはいえ、これだけは譲れないとばかりに俺は、チョイスしてきた持論を展開する。",
+		   NULL, " To show her this was my last compromise, I began explaining the choice.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
+
 //「豚骨はうまいんだよ＠　大盛りだけど大味ってわけじゃないし...！！＠
 	PlaySE(3, "s20/01/440100043", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「豚骨はうまいんだよ！",
-		   NULL, "\"Pork-bone is good!", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "\"Pork-bone is good!", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
+	Wait (1200);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　大盛りだけど大味ってわけじゃないし…！！」",
-		   NULL, " I don't want a big bowl of tasteless stuff...!!\"", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, " You get a large serving, but the flavor isn't too strong...!!\"", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);