Merge pull request #46 from Norgus/master

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Update/onik_009.txt

@@ -6018,7 +6018,7 @@ void main()
 //「あれはね。人間に代って冬の病魔を吸い取ってくれたお布団を清めてるの。＠
 	PlaySE(3, "s19/02/500200900", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「あれはね。人間に代って冬の病魔を吸い取ってくれたお布団を清めてるの。」",
-		   NULL, "\"She's purifying futons that absorbed illnesses from people over the winter.\"", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "\"She's purifying the futons, which sacrificially absorbed winter's illnesses for those using them.\"", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 
@@ -6395,7 +6395,7 @@ void main()
 
 //　雛見沢中の病魔を吸い取り、綿の花が次々と水面に咲き、そして流れに消えて行った￥
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　雛見沢中の病魔を吸い取り、綿の花が次々と水面に咲き、そして流れに消えて行った。",
-		   NULL, "The flowers of cotton blooming in the water had sucked out all the evil festering in Hinamizawa and drifted off, disappearing into the distance.", Line_Normal);
+		   NULL, "The flowers of cotton blooming in the water had sucked out all the bad illnesses from Hinamizawa and drifted off, disappearing into the distance.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 

Update/onik_009_02.txt

@@ -322,7 +322,7 @@ void main()
 		   NULL, "\"The decision to start the dam project was finalized seven or eight years ago.", Line_WaitForInput);
 	PlaySE(3, "s01/08/120800012", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "黒部に次ぐ巨大な計画だったと聞いてるね。」",
-		   NULL, " I heard it was the next major project after Kurobe.\"", Line_Normal);
+		   NULL, " I heard it was the next largest project after the one in Kurobe.\"", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 	DisableWindow();
@@ -365,7 +365,7 @@ void main()
 		   NULL, "\"The dam reservoir would have covered quite a lot of ground when it was completed.", Line_WaitForInput);
 	PlaySE(3, "s01/08/120800014", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "この雛見沢からずーっと上流の谷河内（やごうち）辺りまでが全部沈むことになったらしい。」",
-		   NULL, " The entire area, right up to Yagouichi way upstream, would be underwater.\"", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, " The entire area, right up to Yagouchi way upstream, would be underwater.\"", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 
@@ -394,7 +394,7 @@ void main()
 
 //　以前、梨花ちゃんが「戦った」と表現したが、それからも激しいものだったことが伺える￥
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　以前、梨花ちゃんが「戦った」と表現したが、それからも激しいものだったことが伺える。",
-		   NULL, "Rika-chan had said there was a 'battle.' From that choice of words I had to guess things had turned violent.", Line_Normal);
+		   NULL, "Rika-chan had said that they had 'fought.' From that choice of words I had to guess things had turned violent.", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 //「裁判にもなったし議会でも取り上げられたんだ＠東京の新聞にも載ったよ。＠
@@ -852,14 +852,14 @@ void main()
 //「被害者の一家はね、!w800…その２年前に転落死したダム誘致派の男の弟一家に当たるのよ。＠
 	PlaySE(3, "s01/09/120900013", 256, 64);	
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「被害者の一家はね、",
-		   NULL, "\"One of the victim's relatives, you see...", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
+		   NULL, "\"The victim's family, you see...", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 	SetValidityOfInput( FALSE );
 	Wait( 800 );
 	SetValidityOfInput( TRUE );
 
 	OutputLine(NULL, "…その２年前に転落死したダム誘致派の男の弟一家に当たるのよ。」",
-		   NULL, " was connected to the younger brother of the dam supporter who fell to his death two years before.\"", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, " happened to be that of the younger brother of the dam supporter who fell to his death two years before.\"", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 
@@ -1278,7 +1278,7 @@ void main()
 		   NULL, "\"Also, the police are treating each case as isolated; they don't believe they're connected.", Line_WaitForInput);
 	PlaySE(3, "s01/08/120800052", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "……警備ってことで私服警官をだいぶ立たせてたみたいだよ。」",
-		   NULL, " ...They're trying to keep it quiet, so it's all plainclothes officers.\"", Line_Normal);
+		   NULL, " ...But apparently they sent quite a few plainclothes officers for security.\"", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 
@@ -1393,7 +1393,7 @@ void main()
 //「全ての事件が原因不明で犯人も手口もナゾ、っていうなら僕も祟りを疑ってもいいよ＠
 	PlaySE(3, "s01/08/120800054", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「全ての事件が原因不明で犯人も手口もナゾ、っていうなら僕も祟りを疑ってもいいよ。",
-		   NULL, "\"If the causes of all of the crimes were unknown, with the perpetrators and their methods all mysteries, then I would think it's the work of a curse.", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "\"If the causes of all of the crimes were unknown, with the perpetrators and their methods all mysteries, then I'd concede the possibility of a curse.", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
 
 
@@ -1404,7 +1404,7 @@ void main()
 		   NULL, "But that's not how things are in reality.", Line_WaitForInput);
 	PlaySE(3, "s01/08/120800056", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "どの事件もちゃんと警察が捜査して真相や犯人を究明してる。」",
-		   NULL, " The police are investigating the evidence and suspects to uncover the truth.\"", Line_Normal);
+		   NULL, " Police investigations have already uncovered the truth and perpetrators for all of the cases.\"", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();
 
 
@@ -1456,8 +1456,8 @@ void main()
 
 //「次の、誘致派の男の夫婦の事故死だってそうさ＠恨みを買う立場だったからね、警察が特に入念に捜査したと思うよ＠それで発表は事故＠他殺じゃない。＠
 	PlaySE(3, "s01/08/120800064", 256, 64);	
-	OutputLine(NULL, "「次の、誘致派の男の夫婦の事故死だってそうさ。",
+	OutputLine(NULL, "「次の、誘致派の夫婦の事故死だってそうさ。",
-		   NULL, "\"The accidental death of the man who supported the dam is the same.", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "\"The accidental deaths of the couple who supported the dam is the same.", Line_WaitForInput);
 	PlaySE(3, "s01/08/120800065", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "恨みを買う立場だったからね、警察が特に入念に捜査したと思うよ。",
 		   NULL, " He was in a position that made others hate him. The police made a point of investigating from that angle.", Line_WaitForInput);