translation and nuance fixes

for the second change - I think も here is more of an emphasis than a
literal "as well"

Update/omake_01.txt

@@ -1041,7 +1041,7 @@ void main()
 		   NULL, " There has to be a reason for a curse, right?", Line_WaitForInput);
 	PlaySE(3, "s20/03/440300283", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　無差別に祟るとは思えないなー。",
-		   NULL, " I don't think there would be something indiscriminately cursing everything.", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, " It doesn't make sense for a curse to just indiscriminately befall someone.", Line_WaitForInput);
 	PlaySE(3, "s20/03/440300284", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "そこんとこ説明できるの？」",
 		   NULL, " Can somebody explain that?\"", Line_WaitForInput);
@@ -1205,7 +1205,7 @@ void main()
 
 	PlaySE(3, "s20/04/440400154", 256, 64);
 	OutputLine(NULL, "「魅音さんもこだわりますのね。」",
-		   NULL, "\"Mion-san seems rather particular about this as well.\"", Line_WaitForInput);
+		   NULL, "\"Mion-san seems rather particular about this.\"", Line_WaitForInput);
 	OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);