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translation and wording fixes

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"pension" is wrong, and "land of her birth" sounds awkward.
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Norgus
2015-12-05 16:42:49 +00:00
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Update/onik_tips_17.txt
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@@ -410,7 +410,7 @@ void main()
//　退職金でローン返して、お母さんと北海道に引っ越すんじゃなかったっけ？＠ //　退職金でローン返して、お母さんと北海道に引っ越すんじゃなかったっけ？＠
PlaySE(3, "s20/00/442700013", 128, 64); PlaySE(3, "s20/00/442700013", 128, 64);
OutputLine(NULL, "　退職金でローン返して、お母さんと北海道に引っ越すんじゃなかったっけ？」", OutputLine(NULL, "　退職金でローン返して、お母さんと北海道に引っ越すんじゃなかったっけ？」",
NULL, "Weren't you going to pay off your mortgage with your pension and move up to Hokkaido with your mom?\"", Line_WaitForInput); NULL, "Weren't you going to pay off your mortgage with your severance pay and move up to Hokkaido with your mom?\"", Line_WaitForInput);
OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping);
@@ -418,7 +418,7 @@ void main()
//「婆さまがどうしても生まれの北海道に帰りたいって泣くんですよ...＠最後のご奉公なんです＠退職金は、まぁススキノで楽しむことにします＠なっはっはっは！！￥ //「婆さまがどうしても生まれの北海道に帰りたいって泣くんですよ...＠最後のご奉公なんです＠退職金は、まぁススキノで楽しむことにします＠なっはっはっは！！￥
PlaySE(3, "s20/11/440700053", 128, 64); PlaySE(3, "s20/11/440700053", 128, 64);
OutputLine(NULL, "「婆さまがどうしても生まれの北海道に帰りたいって泣くんですよ…。", OutputLine(NULL, "「婆さまがどうしても生まれの北海道に帰りたいって泣くんですよ…。",
NULL, "\"Mother pines to return to the land of her birth...", Line_WaitForInput); NULL, "\"Mother pines to return to her birthplace...", Line_WaitForInput);
OutputLine(NULL, "最後のご奉公なんです。", OutputLine(NULL, "最後のご奉公なんです。",
NULL, " It's the least I can do.", Line_WaitForInput); NULL, " It's the least I can do.", Line_WaitForInput);
PlaySE(3, "s20/11/440700054", 128, 64); PlaySE(3, "s20/11/440700054", 128, 64);