wording
using "thought" makes it sound like a lead up to a surprise where the "body" was actually alive - opposite of intentions!
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// 血の惨劇が終われば、そこには誰の眼にも生きているとは思えない無残な屍...¥
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// 血の惨劇が終われば、そこには誰の眼にも生きているとは思えない無残な屍...¥
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OutputLine(NULL, " 血の惨劇が終われば、そこには誰の眼にも生きているとは思えない無残な屍…。",
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OutputLine(NULL, " 血の惨劇が終われば、そこには誰の眼にも生きているとは思えない無残な屍…。",
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NULL, "After this bloody tragedy was over, they were left with a body which nobody thought was alive...", Line_Normal);
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NULL, "After this bloody tragedy was over, they were left with a body which nobody could have mistaken as alive...", Line_Normal);
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ClearMessage();
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ClearMessage();
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// 日頃から粗暴な振る舞いで容疑者たちをいじめていたXXさん@
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// 日頃から粗暴な振る舞いで容疑者たちをいじめていたXXさん@
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