wording

using "thought" makes it sound like a lead up to a surprise where the "body" was actually alive - opposite of intentions!
2015-11-19 19:35:30 +00:00
parent ed17f08252
commit 1a73dec829
1 changed files with 1 additions and 1 deletions
--- a/Update/onik_tips_06.txt
+++ b/Update/onik_tips_06.txt
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@

 //　血の惨劇が終われば、そこには誰の眼にも生きているとは思えない無残な屍...￥
 	OutputLine(NULL, "　血の惨劇が終われば、そこには誰の眼にも生きているとは思えない無残な屍…。",
-		   NULL, "After this bloody tragedy was over, they were left with a body which nobody thought was alive...", Line_Normal);
+		   NULL, "After this bloody tragedy was over, they were left with a body which nobody could have mistaken as alive...", Line_Normal);
 	ClearMessage();

 //　日頃から粗暴な振る舞いで容疑者たちをいじめていたＸＸさん＠