I wanted to leave an explanation for why the translation doesn't match
the Japanese here.
a pretty literal translation of Rika's line here would be "... If you
took out any one of us in remaining lines to record, Keiichi would be
able to join the party"
This just doesn't make sense to me, and didn't really get cleared up by
asking Japanese players.
So I'm keeping the Sui text in Japanese so that it isn't a weird
mismatch with the audio for Japanese players, but keeping the
translation of the original game text, because it works better IMO.
I mostly changed this one because of the specificity of PTSD as a
condition, despite it not being in the Japanese script (and there not
really being any good reason for Mion to think that Keiichi would have
PTSD)
I just noticed for the first time (having to write it out myself) that
Rena's name is spelled out weirdly.
The type of romanization employed seems to be keeping long vowels (Like
Ooishi as opposed to Oishi) but Ryuuguu is half-half - despite being two
long vowels only the first one is kept long in romanization.
"everything below" in the top half would include the bottom half, and
"everything above" in the bottom half would include the top half.
This is an obvious logical inconsistency (since both halves are intact,
with some lines in the middle missing).
trying to stay neutral with "it" (at the risk of spoilers - I suppose
most accurate would be "she", but Rena probably doesn't know either way
anyway.. so only "it" makes any real sense)
